Justin P Wade

Ladies close your eyes

I have read only Ch.1 so far, a very cinematic piece the writing flows well and the 'show' rather than 'tell' used well, a lyric of images I think. It is engaging and I would be keen to continue reading. I get a 1950s U.S.A feel from both the prose and the setting.

Biomorph

I have enjoyed this work and believe this author has a lot of promise. Dealing with an OP hero is never easy but here there are reasonable limits in place to keep it in the realms of reason. The show and tell aspect of the writing needs work, but that comes with rewrites so, again highly promising.

Pathway to the Unmaker

I loved the ideas from the start,love the first line and the poetic placement of the words, but I did feel there was a lot of tell and not enough show, I like to read pictures off of the page and felt more like someone was whispering in my ear. This all may be a matter of taste on my part as I see your other reviews enjoyed it more than I.
On that note congratulations on completing the work I am sure you will continue to thrill your readers in the future.