Justin P Wade

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Ladies close your eyes

I have read only Ch.1 so far, a very cinematic piece the writing flows well and the 'show' rather than 'tell' used well, a lyric of images I think. It is engaging and I would be keen to continue reading. I get a 1950s U.S.A feel from both the prose and the setting.

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Pathway to the Unmaker

I loved the ideas from the start,love the first line and the poetic placement of the words, but I did feel there was a lot of tell and not enough show, I like to read pictures off of the page and felt more like someone was whispering in my ear. This all may be a matter of taste on my part as I see your other reviews enjoyed it more than I.
On that note congratulations on completing the work I am sure you will continue to thrill your readers in the future.

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