Ahh MC stories! I'm a sucker for a bad boy with a heart of gold. If he has tattoos and a motorcycle, that's a plus too!
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This story is definitely for smut lovers! Excuse me while I fan myself from all the steam! It's sexy, fast paced, great characters, AND an interesting storyline.
At first I wasn't sure I cared much for the open audience sex scene and how quickly the characters flew themselves into the physical part of the relationship. However, the more I dived into the story, the more it made sense for the characters.
The plot is intriguing, wondering what bomb will go off that will give such a conflict for the hero and heroine. I'm also hoping to learn more about Carrie and Bender (I think it was Bender) - they seem like they could be a cute couple!
Grammar and punctuation is always the hard part, I can tell this story was written for fun and pure entertainment, so I won't harp on any of that - it's difficult for all writers. There were a few mishaps, but it never took away from the story.
The author writes in a way that describes scenes very well, so that is a plus - the show, not telling.
Overall, I do like this little adventure and haven't been able to put it down since I started reading it. Great job, author, keep up the good work! Excited for more updates to see what will happen :)
Please keep writing!