koaël

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A nice start to the story. Though a bit of ambiguity, but nothing that an editing can not fix right.

The plot seems to be a very interesting one. The prologue seemed a bit confusing at a certain point and also a few unnoticeable grammatical errors, but besides those - the storyline seems to be unique and engaging enough for the audience to want to read more.

All that is required is a but of editing, otherwise the entire start and the description is brilliantly penned.

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It's so beautifully descriptive!

I simply loved the way you have written the entire start of this story and how smoothly you have transacted through the scenes. The conversations are inserted where they needed to be and the descriptions are detailed very appropriately.

It's easy to imagine and you can absolutely feel yourself in Eden's place. Keep up the good work!

In case you don't mind and have time, please do check my stories too and drop in a review.
Thanks!

– Koaël @koael

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