koaël
@koael
Hello, you have reached Koael, a twenty something tanned Indian girl. >> Wattpad : Winestains (shortstories) // Reminizence >> Inkitt : Winestains (short stories)
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A nice start to the story. Though a bit of ambiguity, but nothing that an editing can not fix right.
The plot seems to be a very interesting one. The prologue seemed a bit confusing at a certain point and also a few unnoticeable grammatical errors, but besides those - the storyline seems to be unique and engaging enough for the audience to want to read more. All that is required is a but of editing, otherwise the entire start and the description is brilliantly penned.
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