Krishanku

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great plot

this is the story like I want to live there. felt trapped inside it. All the characters are very alive. Keep it up

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My pov

Very heart touching and deep. The author has expressed the situation quite well, able to penetrate my heart. Excellent jobπŸ‘

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Page turner

This book is definitely a page-turner. The author knows how to bind the readers to her books by words and descriptions. You made a great job.
Can't wait to see what's next!

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I love it

The plot is awesome. I like the way story goes. It has some potential. The language is simple which make me read all the twelve chapters in one breath.

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Excellent

I have read something like this after a long time. The lines are still buzzing in my head. There is a pain , a cry for love and the author made it sure the reader can feel that.
Excellent work.

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My experience

I am presenting my opinion on the basis of the three chapters I have read. The first thing the characters here are very interesting. The author presented them well. It's amusingly confusing. I like the part. But I think this story deserves to be longer. It has the potential to hold the reader, just adding is needed.
At last, nice imagination

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My experience

This is a very interesting story. The author has done a good job.
Worth reading

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My experience

The plot is good, very adventurous, and the way, the author explains everything makes it more readable. I enjoyed it a lot.
Worth readingπŸ‘

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Sweet

I like the poem the way it rhymes the words. It's fantastic

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Worth reading

Good choice of words. It's like the author knows which word to use at the perfect place.
It's hard for me to talk about the storyline. Basically, I am giving my review after 3rd chapter as it's an ongoing story, though I like it.

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My experience

The author writes everything sweet and simple. Her language makes the book readable and juicy. Besides the plot is interesting. A unique story. I like the way you presented the wolf, without following the cliche trend.
GOOD JOB πŸ‘

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Amazing

I read all in one breath. A short and sweet story of a simple girl who loves nature more than the machine world. The author painted well this picture of her. I enjoyed the way she used to talk to birds and the moon.
Good job.

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My review

The author has depicted the characters of Sam and Dean very well. It is very much similar to the seasons. Next interesting thing is that when she says, "in our world you are in a tv show, ". That makes the story more interesting.
I wish the author wrote a little more. I mean Some more scenes is expected from her.

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splendid

the author has a very good way of explaining things. the way he explains Rita, is amazing. The final chapter makes my heart pump faster. Great job

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thrilling

the author has explained everything with very close observation. It gave a lovely feeling. The story as a confusion or curiosity which makes read further more. I have read to chapter 23 and i can't wait to read the next chapters

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worth reading

the beginning of the story is very interesting. it pushed me to read more. The main character, the way author explained, raises a curiosity to know more about them.

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the explanation

the way , author explains everything in the book is super awesome. it felt like we can see those things in front of our eyes when read it. Good work

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My POV

I read a few chapters, and it's sufficient enough to hook me to the book. While reading it, I hardly felt that it's not a real story.
Good job.

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My POV

There are two things which make this book interesting are the plot and the way of writing. A strong mysterious vibe is felt while reading the book, and the writing style of the author makes it more flourishing.
A book with potential

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awesome

After a long time, I read something like this. It's kind of a unique one. Great job.

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Nice Plot

After a long time, I read something so interesting. I don't read much about teen wolf stories, but this story pushed me to change my mind. I enjoyed it a lot. Waiting for the upcoming parts...

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Page turner

This book is really a page-turner. I am completely hooked to this book. Good job

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My POV

I like the story. Leading by a female, and the best part of the book is the dialogues. I like the way you wrote the conversations. Enjoyable

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Awesome

I am just hooked to the story from its first line. The author knows how to keep the readers in suspense. Secondly, the plot is also very interesting, kind of unique. I enjoyed the book. Can't wait for the next part

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Amazing

Very interesting story. Really, a page turner. Author has done a great job

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My experience

A reader engaging story from the beginning. There is a tension, a suspicious environment which cn be felt while reading the book and this is the best part of it. Excellent work

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Page turner

This is an ongoing story. So, I am not sure how it ends. But so far I have read, I can tell one thing I enjoyed it. Its worth reading

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scary

I have read two chapters by now, though I can tell that this is a perfect example of a horror story. Author knows to scare people by his/her words. Can't wait to read more....

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Nice

A short and sweet story. Its like the author explains a lot of things in a few words. The way he presented is remarkable.

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My experience

A different story from the stories available in inkitt. I enjoyed it.

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Worth Reading

The story has potential, and the author made it more interesting with his/her way of writing.
Awesome read

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My pov

This is an ongoing novel, though I am hooked to it. Excited to know what's going to happen next!!!!
Good job

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Good read

The story is enjoyable. The author wrote everything in an interesting way. Good job

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My experience

Worth reading. It holds a different concept.

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Page turner

Interesting plot with impressive description which made me hooked to the book. I like the character of Olivia. The way she felt with everything is amazing.

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Interesting

The plot of the story is a mix-up of supernatural and real issues. One of it's kind. The writing style of the author made it more juicy.

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Impressive

This is a very impressive storyline, far from the usual. The idea of presenting the animal with a different approach is very interesting. I like the book.
There are some minor spelling errors. But it's nothing. Those can be fixed.
Overall, nice book

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Wow!

I was not expecting this...the most unique story filled with suspense. I enjoyed each line of this book. The author is also a superhero who can hypnotize anyone with her words.
Excellent jobπŸ‘

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Curious

The plot of the story is very interesting, with lots of problems and confusion and suspense. I am hooked to the book.
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My experience

I like the story. The way those characters are represented and deal with each other. Waiting for the updates

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Good story line

The story line is amazing, filled with an unique suspension. I enjoyed it a lot.
The book cover of you're is also attractive
Keep up the good job

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Awesome plot

This book contains an issue which is bullying. I am emotionally attached to it. But that's not the only reason of me liking the book. Generally it's great story, a readable one.
The language, the way of presentation is also very good

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My pov

This plot line is amazing. It's a good experience to read the book. I felt amazed.
But, there is an issue where author need to focus is grammar. Not a big problem, a minor issue. I am facing it too.
Overall, good book πŸ‘

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Interesting story

The author has presented both the dragon world and the Atlantis quite well. I must say he painted quite well. The language is fine which makes the story more colorful.
But, there is something I like to add. In some places, there are descriptions more than needed. For ex, when Draycos was waiting, he explained like what type of belt he was wearing. I don't think it's that important.
Anyway, this book has potential to pull the reader.
All the best

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Awesome

I like the characters and their conversations. This book has potential.
A juicy book which worth reading more than once

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Page turner

I love the way you presented the characters. It's felt real.
The dialogues are also realistic filled with emotions.
Nice job.πŸ‘

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Nice

I like the way those words rhyme. This gives the real vibe of a poem.
Next good thing about the poem is it's idea. Make me remember the poem twinkle twinkle little star.
Sounds like a sweet bad time poem

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Not so interesting

The theme is good. But it does not feel like a poem to me. More likely someone is just saying something.
These are just some good lines. It needs more work to be called as a poem

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Heart touching

Ava, the main character has lots of problems in school, in the family. Though she proved herself as a responsible and caring one. The best part I like about the book is that she has a best friend who herself. She likes to talk alone. The author painted quite well the picture.
There are some minor technical errors that are totally negligible.

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My pov

This is an ongoing story. But, so far I have read, it makes me feel like I can see it, feel it. Character are strong, situation is strong.πŸ‘

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My feeling

The author knows how to bind the reader with her words. She did a great job. I must say the way she presented all the characters, I can not hold my self to read it later. Finished it in one breath
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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My experience

An intriguing story. Keeps me wanting more and more. I wish I could have a paperback copy of it.

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My experience with this story

The plot is amazing. Two people fighting with each other to hide their love. The author has explained it through their conversation pretty well. I am wondering what's next.
I like to add something to the story if the author explained other things to a little like emotions, body language, dress, and kind of things. It helps the reader to be in the moment.
For example, when Dave said holding his coffee mug or taking a sip from the coffee.

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My Pov

There are two things that make this book readable. First, the curious storyline, like it works as a page-turner. Second, the language the author use. A simple, and pleasant way to explain everything.
Overall, I like the story.

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Good story

The story line is a bit different from the usual werewolf stories. That's what this book makes unique and readable. The author has a good hold in language.
At the end, worth reading

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Good book

I like the book. The author has mixed all the texture like romance, humor, the innocence of a machine, and all. Overall, for me, it's an uncommon love story. I enjoyed it

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My review

I love the storyline. But the best part which makes this book readable and interesting is the writing style of the author. He has a very interesting way of explaining everything.
Overall, I enjoyed the story

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Good story base

I like he story. The author has a good hold on the language. Basically, it worth reading. I sweet, simple, short story.
But I would like to tell that this could have better. It needs a little more adding of spices. I mean, everything happened too easily, whole story is just conversation.
I am sure the author is a talented one and she can do moe than this.

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My experience

A very interesting book. Author has an unique way of explaining the situation, good combination of horror and mystery. And not to mention the ending made the book more interesting

By the way, It would add more test if there is some other point of views except the main character.
Over all this a an entertaining book, worth reading.

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my POV

I wouldn't like to tell it as a complete story. For me, it felt like a scene from a story. Though, it sounds interesting to me. The author has a unique way to focus on the area of pollution, which is very nice. my advice is to add some more spices, some more scenes and characters if you want this to make a full grown and attractive story

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good plot

the story is not completed yet. I am writing the reviews while it's ongoing. That's why I can say that the plot is very nice. The vivid representation of all the characters. So, keep writing.
Just focus on your punctuation and if possible highlight the dialogues.
Otherwise, good story...keeps me engaged

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alive characters

this is an ongoing story. that's why it is hard to guess the end of it.but as much I read, I felt the characters are very alive. This story is a good mixture of wolf and erotica.

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my review

The story has a good plot. The journey of a week girl starts as he unlocked herself from the fear for her father. I enjoyed that part. It's an ongoing story and I am waiting to read the rest of it. The story is as if you can't fight for yourself, nobody is going to help you. A good way of lightening the fact

some silly mistakes are there like don't using capital letters when needed. But it's ignorable.

Finally, a good job., keep doing it

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great plot

this book has a great idea or more likely it can give the reades some unique tastes of a world.

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unique plot

the plot of the story is a mixture of love and paranormal. The conversation between Greg and Alison are very interesting and funny

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genre

the way the author presented the the genre of romance ,makes the book interesting

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storyline

te story it follow is very unique and interesting. Finally, worth reading

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explaination

the plot and the way, the author is explaining things is very good.

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texture

a unique way to present romance, the point of view presented here is diveresed and interesting

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heart touching

the feeling explained here, is very heart touching and relaxing. Anyone who is looking for a calm environment can read this and feel it

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good mixture of paranormal and love

the book has good imaginary character but need a little more explanation about the scenes to fill it more and better

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