Krishna

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So beautiful

It's really beautiful. Awesome work. Keep it up

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Good work

It's good. I liked this story. You have described too much about characters otherwise your story is really good. Keep up the good work,

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I love your plot

I love your plot. It's interesting and I would love to read the next chapter

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Love life with blood alpha

It's my first story and I am new on inkitt. There will be some mistakes but I am trying to edit it as soon as possible. I am having a hard time dealing with app errors. I hope you understand

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It's unique

It's a very unique idea and very beautifully written. It's interesting

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Overall good

Your story is good but there are some things I want to point out for your own good. Explain clearly when you are doing a time leap or changing scenarios. It was a little confusing when she is talking with his brother one second ago and then he is carrying her because she tried to run away. But otherwise, your story is beautiful

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Good start

I liked your plot and were panther's concept. And the arguing between her panther and herself. It was funny

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