Krishna

Love life with blood alpha

It's my first story and I am new on inkitt. There will be some mistakes but I am trying to edit it as soon as possible. I am having a hard time dealing with app errors. I hope you understand

Overall good

Your story is good but there are some things I want to point out for your own good. Explain clearly when you are doing a time leap or changing scenarios. It was a little confusing when she is talking with his brother one second ago and then he is carrying her because she tried to run away. But otherwise, your story is beautiful