Interesting Combination of Ideas
While reading your story, I could feel the refreshing combination of different ideas into one. I never expected that such a combination might be successful, but you made it work so well!
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The details are sometimes boring but they work well to weave an artistic view of the scene which is rather amazing.
I do have concerns about how fast she (the main character) accepted the whole situation with no complaints, it is unusual, but maybe it's part of the originality in the style that you have.
I will continue reading this book because I like where the story is headed. However, this is a personal plea as a reader, don't make the progression of events too obvious. Maybe spice it a little bit with unexpected events. (this is just me loving mysteries more than food)
I love Greek Gods and this is one of the stories that put down their worth a bit (Zeus as a weatherman for example), but if it doesn't affect the events too much I guess it's fine.
Your style is amazing, nonetheless, and you use beautiful analogies and metaphors, and you use strong vocabularies, so I may not be surprised if you're majoring in English yourself!
Keep up the great work, and I will be a loyal reader for this book until it ends!