Lamis Hoteit

Beirut

Reading is a pleasure felt by Realists. Strange, but true. It's only the few who know reality well enough to desire another one.

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I loved it!

This is truly amazing! I like how you linked everything together in a nice plot and that my imagination ran wild while reading each chapter. You have a great talent and you should just pay attention to some grammatical issues. all in all I enjoyed reading it a lot!!

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Amazing indeed!

Your style in writing is definitely admirable! I loved your analogies and how you used every opportunity to make the reader observe the events from their POV, something that we have in common btw. I love the fast yet appropriate progress of the events which can make anyone hooked. I'm really looking forward for future chapters!

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Interesting Combination of Ideas

While reading your story, I could feel the refreshing combination of different ideas into one. I never expected that such a combination might be successful, but you made it work so well!
The details are sometimes boring but they work well to weave an artistic view of the scene which is rather amazing.
I do have concerns about how fast she (the main character) accepted the whole situation with no complaints, it is unusual, but maybe it's part of the originality in the style that you have.
I will continue reading this book because I like where the story is headed. However, this is a personal plea as a reader, don't make the progression of events too obvious. Maybe spice it a little bit with unexpected events. (this is just me loving mysteries more than food)
I love Greek Gods and this is one of the stories that put down their worth a bit (Zeus as a weatherman for example), but if it doesn't affect the events too much I guess it's fine.
Your style is amazing, nonetheless, and you use beautiful analogies and metaphors, and you use strong vocabularies, so I may not be surprised if you're majoring in English yourself!
Keep up the great work, and I will be a loyal reader for this book until it ends!

Best Regards,
Lamis

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Nice !!

The way you built on the character of Levy is really great. I could almost imagine his personality being built up from pain and misery like a Pheonix. There are some exaggerated events like "his uncle giving him a mansion", but they served the purpose of the storyline which shows a great talent!

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The power in my veins

I loved the plot twist of William at the end and how powerful she became. Its an amazing story and I enjoyed reading it.

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