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I think there's a beauty in romantic stories that are simple because sometimes that's all that's needed: just a tale of two individuals who grow and become better versions of themselves as they realize, through their love for each other, that they're respectively worthy of being cared for, cherished and loved. Personally, this was what appealed to me the most! I also liked how the dialogue really reflected the language that we use in real-life.
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It was very easy to read, but I also thought it progressed a little too fast for me. Specifically, I think there could've been more character development, such as more background information about each main character.
SPOILER ALERT: DO NO READ PASS THIS POINT IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE BOOK YET!!
I really think the storyline about Eka and her ex-boyfriend could be expanded more. There's definitely a lot of potential material that could be integrated into the main storyline (Eka & Louis) and, in turn, help readers better understand the complexity of each character as well as the problems that are holding them back from pursuing a relationship with each other.
Thank you for writing this story :)