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The greatest story exists within us when we acknowledge the beauty of our thoughts and feelings.
Between us lies an existing distance,
an unspoken void
filled with uncertainty and inevitable judgement.
Yet,
in this fraction of a second,
you and I have decided to meet
amongst the infinite outcomes
that could otherwise replace
this very moment.
Yet,
here I am
and here you are,
crossing paths at this point in time,
hoping to fill in the existing distance,
the unspoken void
that also lies within ourselves
together.
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Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel
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Kate Schimmer Child: Amazing plot and characters. And so impressive you’ve written a story inside a story. Can’t wait to read more of your work ❤️
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.
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Sarah Widdecomb: I loved it. It’s very well written and kept me captivated while wondering what was going to happen next.
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Bayley Smith: What a great story, I binged in one day! Love Shay’s personality and Matt sounds like my type of guy! This story was something out of the norm for me to read but it was a great read.
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lfayenrock: Great love sto. Enjoyed it very much and can’t wait to read more of your books
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lunaartsoul___: I loved the way your story unfolds. The emotional depth and structure made it feel very engaging, almost cinematic at times.I’m someone who enjoys both reading and visual storytelling, and your work really stood out to me. If you’re open to chatting about creative ideas someday, I’d love that.
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kenshop: Love this story. It’s fast paced and hard to put down. I just want to see what happens next. Wow so good...
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Wow! I am impressed. You have worded it very beautifully, neither too simple, nor too flowery. And you have also suceeded in portraing the feelings in it. Great work. I just have to point out one thing tho: I think you might want to capitalise the first letter of the words in your title, but that's your personal choice.