Lisa Urban

Don’t like the ending

I really liked this story until the end. I needed a better resolution to the story. I don’t like cliff hangers that leave you wondering what happened next in each of the main characters lives. It is your story, you made it up. I can’t just imagine what might happen next in the story. They are not my characters speaking to me. You are their vessel to tell what happens. I was good until the end. Otherwise, good job on writing the story.

The consequences are coming!?!

Good story. Interesting characters. A plot twist you may or may not see coming.