lovely_roisin

A college student with some free time

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Smoky Joes

I honestly can say I am not one for historical stories though this one really gripped me. I felt the amount of action is enough to get anyone interested. I will say I had to brush up on my history during my reading which was a minor inconvenience though I truly enjoy it. As a whole I do feel that Smoky Joes really has the potential to form into something great. I just would prefer more background considering I found myself researching certain important historical aspects of the story! The writing style is great, I can tell that the author is very skilled. Overall a great story.

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Amazing

I really enjoyed reading this story for multiple reasons. First off I'd like to praise you on your storytelling ability. I felt drawn in. You do an amazing job describing things. One thing I am a sucker for is detail. Honestly, that is something many people struggle with. In my eyes the main goal for writers to achieve is to be able to paint a picture for the reader. To allow little to no imagination up to the reader. You do an excellent job. My one small critique is your formatting. Yes I realize this is a website and not a published work, so formatting is kind of free range. Adding things in all caps adding more than one exclamation point ect. are things I personally find daunting. They are such small things , and yes I realize that people may have difficulty expressing emotions through characters, but I view it as silly for lack of a better word. Other than that I believe you have an enticing and promising story.

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