markashervington

Good Story. Nice gentle pace.

Good story. I like Dolly and how cute she is. Liam seems a nice man too. I'm really enjoying the pace of this.

Good idea. Needs an edit.

I like the idea but a proof read would help stop the repeating words. Could get good though. The idea of a world under the old ones is a good one.

Well paced and writen

I like the pace of the book and the balance between the sex/action scenes... the style if writing moves along well. The subject matter is handled very well, I like the balance between erotica and the repulsion of the abuse. Some grammatical issues and a few spellings but that could be a mismatch between English and American. So far I'm.enjoying it.