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markymark261
Would have liked it more without the first sentence
Schizophrenia's a scary disease to have but, despite popular misconception, it's a totally different thing from multiple personality disorder. You might have been better doing a little research, since anyone who knows about the illness might be turned off by your mistake.
Having said that, if I ignored the cover and the first sentence of your story, I thought it was well-written and a scary premise. Having said that, there's an unfinished sentence in there, "They took me to my", which could do with correcting.
Overall, I liked it as a story, just a bit niggled about the mental health ignorance.
