marremom

tales from the depths

okay lovee, I writing better now I didn't forgett you, lol. If anyone is into kink this is thee story for you it blew my mind I'm not sure if it would fall under beastiality or just really f****d up I never could have imagined what was coming when I started this wildd trip intto the weird wow spot on I can't wait to see what else you have loocked away in that head off yours great read thank you for shariing

love me like damnation

A dark and unexpected fleeting romance in a realm of total madness. An unusual twist on the relationship with Satan, an entity feared and dreaded, but loved by this girl, heart and soul. Was it real or delusional? Was her sacrifice only in her mind or did it claim her in life? Did his sacrifice of losing her only darken his blackened soul? Only the forest knows.. Thank you for this amazing trip into sinking madness.

the shattered mind

Again, poetry I can understand. Depression is a hard thing to deal with even with a support team backing you. You are the only one that can fight the demons and claw your way back, only you. Again sir, thank you for sharing.

Trawlers, fishermen and Hessle road.

I will be the first to admit that I just don't get poetry, it goes right over my head. But this piece was more my speed, meaning, I actually knew what the author was saying. A heart breaking piece, to stop and recognize what these brave men endured, and the pain of the loved ones left behind.. I would also like to thank the author for the insight into, but a moment of his life at sea as well. Thank you sir, well done.

To the devil a son

This story started out with ideas of dread and fear for a young man going out into the world on his own, but no such thing. I knew this author had a comical side, but this one took it up and over the top. I found myself laughing out loud at the horrific situation he found himself in. Wonderful tale. Thank you for sharing.

The Barry special bear

This author has touched my heart with his understanding of the different needs that we all have. No one is alike, but we all need one another. I feel the pain that the little bear has from being excluded in enjoying the simple things in life,such as a picnic with friends. The author feels like he has in-depth knowledge of this little bear's issues. I would dearly love to see a series of books like this touching on other issues that need that little extra, that love. Thank you sir for your contribution.

short story collection

A heart warming tale of the strength of family reminding us that we are never alone in our times of trial. Author has a wonderful skill for description, bringing the scene to life. a few grammatical errors, but nothing to distract from the story. The second story was a complete disappointment. the story goes back to the beginning and repeats before it concludes. This needs a new write up, but it is a compelling plot. Thank you for sharing.

poetry- a journey

I will be the first in line to admit that I just don't get poetry, usually going right over my head, but. But, your work was simple, actually saying what you were saying. I understood and felt the meaning behind each one. This is the kind of petty I could become a great fan of. Thank you for sharing your heart with me.

time protocol

this went from heartbreaking to horror in the blink of an eye! can you imagine having the fate of the past weigh on your soul for all of those years just to discover that you were the reason for the outcome? Wonderful story. it has that favored twilight zone feel to it. thank you for sharing.

popping my son's cherry for christmas

very arousing short, a bid bang in a small package, loved it. thank you for sharing.