marytej

I love writing stories that comes from my thoughts. I sometimes dream of my story ideas.Lol To purchase my book: Loving my boyfriend's best friend, Click on the support me link.

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Good for a start-up

I like the way you started and centered on the main character. I know first chapters are always difficult to write, believe me. But it was good. So I hope in the next chapter you center on Harry's past, you know dig in some dirty secrets, anything, just something to make readers love it more. Being a fan of Harry Styles, I'm not really happy he's bad to Kiara but I hope he changes. Good work! Hope to see more....

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