Masterie_Z

Love The Concept

Ok, I'm only on my early chapters now so this review I wrote didn't exactly reflect the whole book.

Plot wise, it's really interesting and got me hooked from the prologue since I'm curious to know how the story will turn. Different traditions and culture are also being implemented here and that's a plus if you like to learn about new things. The characters design are quite unique and I don't know why, even though he's supposed to be the villain, I like Macho the most so far xD (I always love the antagonist in a book/movie).

Now, for the criticism part, the book need major editing and proofreading if you want to understand it well. Grammar and flow can do better imo. Otherwise, you'll just have to get by with what the story offered at that particular chapter. But the author already told me that she do plan on editing this, just lacking the time right now. So that's actually good!

Overall, it's a book that can be improved but it's a good book. If you're a horror lover, you should try this book^^

Freaking Read This!

Exactly as my title said.
Read the damn book! You'll not regret it. Here, take my virtual 50 dollars if you think I'm lying.

So far, I've never given a full star rating for the stories in Inkitt, but this one deserves it. It's a great one-shot horror which will take you inside the mind of a mad man. I love the writing since it's simple and not overly complicated, but it'll still able to grab your attention and make you engage with the reading. Grammar is also fine, I can't spot any errors and if there's one, it might be freaking little.

So yeah, give this book a chance, I mean, have you seen the summary? It's interesting ok. You will like this story as I do :)

Love The Mood

It has only been 3 chapters, so I can't deduce much. But, from what I can garner so far, the book feels relaxing and no overdramatic, complicated, life-and-death issues to make your head and heart stressed out. The grammar and writing are really good, trust me. It's simple and lovely.

I like the characters so far and I feel like the main couple's romance would be great with the good old slow burn and cute moments. And I love that Max as a character is someone with his own problem rather than just focusing on the mate stuff. He got his own dream and challenges that he has to face.

Overall, great book. And you'll love it if you like a cute love story.

It's just that good.

Where should I start? I'm not good with writing review actually since I rarely make one. But let me say this, your writing is beautiful, damn gripping and I can already have a vivid imagination on the setting, character and the emotion.

I try to see which part I can comment for improvement but I couldn't really see one (or I'm just too lacking in the writing department to notice it) aside from really minor grammar errors and sentences break that could do better.

And this is more of my own personal preference, but I think on the start of chapter 2, I was like 'omg what happen next I need to see' but the description of the character situation and her viewpoint (which is greatly crafted) was very tiny little dragging it kinda made my mood go 'girl hurry up we need to see what happen'. You got what I'm trying to say here haha? But this could be my mood alone cause I've always been the impatient/rushing type when it comes to horror stuff.

Overall, good job author! Really great writing for horror story since it's engaging and the mood is built nicely. Your vocab and writing are so good it made me feel like mine was written by a 3rd grader trying to write her first fantasy story to impress her parents ;_;