Love The Concept
Ok, I'm only on my early chapters now so this review I wrote didn't exactly reflect the whole book.
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Plot wise, it's really interesting and got me hooked from the prologue since I'm curious to know how the story will turn. Different traditions and culture are also being implemented here and that's a plus if you like to learn about new things. The characters design are quite unique and I don't know why, even though he's supposed to be the villain, I like Macho the most so far xD (I always love the antagonist in a book/movie).
Now, for the criticism part, the book need major editing and proofreading if you want to understand it well. Grammar and flow can do better imo. Otherwise, you'll just have to get by with what the story offered at that particular chapter. But the author already told me that she do plan on editing this, just lacking the time right now. So that's actually good!
Overall, it's a book that can be improved but it's a good book. If you're a horror lover, you should try this book^^