Masterie_Z

One of a kind 👍

English is not the author's first language, I keep that in mind when I read this. Surprisingly, the reading is not that bad like most of the non-native English writer's stories in Inkitt here. The first chapter is nicely-written, I love the description, the style of writing and the characters' personalities. I can imagine the scene without forcing myself, so reading it is simply *chef kiss* ❤

But, (sorry to say this author, pls don't be disheartened 😥) as the stories go by, I find the quality of writing kinda dwindling a bit. Punctuation and grammar need extra attention here. However, I don't think this is something that can't be fixed, it just needs to go through some editing/proofreading for it to be better 👍❤

That's my only two cents, I still find it impressive for the author to be able to write this piece. The idea of the story is unique after all. So yeah, do give this book a chance, it's still a good reading 👍

Love The Concept

Ok, I'm only on my early chapters now so this review I wrote didn't exactly reflect the whole book.

Plot wise, it's really interesting and got me hooked from the prologue since I'm curious to know how the story will turn. Different traditions and culture are also being implemented here and that's a plus if you like to learn about new things. The characters design are quite unique and I don't know why, even though he's supposed to be the villain, I like Macho the most so far xD (I always love the antagonist in a book/movie).

Now, for the criticism part, the book need major editing and proofreading if you want to understand it well. Grammar and flow can do better imo. Otherwise, you'll just have to get by with what the story offered at that particular chapter. But the author already told me that she do plan on editing this, just lacking the time right now. So that's actually good!

Overall, it's a book that can be improved but it's a good book. If you're a horror lover, you should try this book^^

Fantastic, Go and Check it Humans!

I rarely check the poem book on Inkitt since those that I've encountered so far are quite....uhm poorly written? (Grammar issue) But this book is simply beautiful. A mixture of themes (dark comedy, dark, romance, lighthearted etc), variety of style, unique messages to convey and some pieces that I read are not written in a convoluted way, it's just simple and direct but still nicely crafted in a poetic sense. So check the book, it'll be a loss to you if you miss this ❤

It's Beautiful

First of all sorry for the late review. But here's my honest thought about this book.
Overall, really beautiful ❤ The way you crafted the story, it's charming like it gives the vibe of fairytale-ish. And I don't know why but I keep having this feeling of 'Oh this is so dreamy' when I read your description ❤✨ I love your writing style, your words are simple, lovely and engaging. The scene is painted in my mind without being forced, it flows naturally. So big claps there 👏🏼
The only thing I'm not satisfied with is Jina disloyalty. But this is my personal preference and I actually understand her relationship and issue are more complicated than it seems like. But it's just that, it didn't take away the lovely vibe of your book. No major grammar error too that I can spot, so good job for that.
In conclusion, a beautifully written story, even if one is not familiar with BTS (like me) this can still be enjoyed✨

Super Potential this one ✨❤

When I first started, I don't have much hope for the book cuz the writing didn't appeal to me that much. But, as I go down more chapters, it's actually good and has great potential! Seriously. I like the issue tackle in this book and the characters shown are all distinct and interesting. What I like is that the way their personalities are written didn't really follow the cliche traits of characters in novels nowadays. Not to mention the way the plot is narrated keeps me reading this✨ So keep up the good job author, for a non-native writer, this is a good book 👍 I'll definitely keep my eyes on this one ❤👀

It has Potential ✨

First of all, let me say your cover is gorgeous ❤✨ there are not many chapters so far so not much can be talked. But this story definitely has potential. Just need to polish your writing, dialogue especially since I have a hard time understanding their conversation. And that Layla bish needs to learn her place 💩 Keep writing and practising author, you can do this! ❤

Perfect!!! ❤🌟❤🌟❤

Ughhh gosh I don't know what to say except than this story is epic, lovely, gorgeous, exciting, beautiful, fantastic and amazing!!!!! It teaches you about love that went beyond the normal concept of romantic love! It conveys a beautiful and well-crafted story of soulmates who shares the most beautiful sister bonding ever!!! Ughhh when I'm so excited I couldn't put my thoughts to words that well. So I might not be able to properly convey this but read this! You won't fucking regret it! The story covered so many things like family's bond, conflicts, betrayal, friendship, love that knows no boundary, respects, strong and resilient woman, Queens 🌟, fantasy, magical creatures and just so many more that I couldn't remember to list down since I'm so excited rn lol 😂 This story should have more views! I wonder why people won't notice it cuz they're missing a lot 🥺 So read this and you won't regret it, I promise ❤❤❤

It's Good 👍 ✨

Since it didn't have that many chapters yet, I couldn't say anything too much since it's too early to conclude an overall review. But from what I've gathered so far, this is quite an enjoyable reading, very scarce amount of grammatical or punctuation errors and is nicely written than some of the stories in Inkitt here. I like Blake and Batman interaction, it's funny to see 😂 the only thing I can suggest to improve is to be a bit more descriptive since it'll make the story more engaging, having the effect of pulling the reader into the story's world rather than just being told what's happening here and there. And I know you can do it cuz the description u hv in your story here is quite good, just need some more of it ❤

👍❤

I read only halfway through the book, so this review doesn't reflect the overall assessment of the story.

I would say the author's writing has improved now compared to her other story so good job 👍👏🏼❤ I like that the concept of the story is that it's a love between two werewolves who weren't mates. And that's a different approach to werewolf troupes. However, there is some part of the story where I find it to be a bit strange (illogical) like *spoiler* in the early chapter where they got attacked by rogues and Amanda suddenly said I got the feeling that the Luna is the one behind all this. It feels like it comes out of nowhere. I think the flow would be better if there's a hint even the slightest about that emotional epilepsy beforehand. That way Amanda's hunch would seem more fitting to the scene. *end of spoiler*

But that's just my two cents, I still think this is a simple but nice reading. In fact, I kinda like this book more than the other one hehe ❤❤❤

It's an interesting story

Lemme start by saying, author, whatever happens, please don't be mad at my review 😢. I'm sorry if it's not much of a positive review but I hope you can take this more as constructive criticism. Your story has potential and that's why I want to be earnest with my comments.

The pros:
Ok so far I've read, this book got an interesting setup. I like the timeline, the characters and their stories. The short writing for each chapter made the reading brisk and easy too. And I like their first event together, playing snowball and wandering free into the forest. It's loveable and sweet for their moments^^

Improvements:
I'm not fond of the event happening in the latest chapter (this is just my preference as a reader, not reflecting the author's overall story). They treat her ordeal so flimsily like it's a small matter and I found that quite unrealistic. And I think the author can flesh out the characters, the description and the events better (author has the talent, her description skill is quite good actually). But they all are very brief and I'm guessing it's because of the short length of every chapter. The spacing and the words can be streamlined too especially on the dialogue part for smoother reading.

Overall, it's a simple and nice reading for me. I've never read a lesbian story before but this is quite a refreshing pov. The writing can be improved (like all writing in the world, I mean every story has flaws what?) and I see good potential in the story that can be polished ❤

Book with Potential 👍❤

First of all, let me start by saying I haven't finished this book when I write this review. This is written based on what I've gathered halfway through the novel, so my perception here might not be thorough.

The pros:
I would say the book has an interesting plot, events and issues that are not that cliche like the normal troupe in a werewolf book. So kudos for that 👍I like that the fml is a strong woman. Strong here doesn't exactly mean can kickass, I mean she's one with strong principles, morality and mental. She learns to grow throughout the book. The ml also is not much of a dick like in most werewolf books (I really hate it when ml got all abusive, unnecessarily dominant and become a control freak). This ml though is such a loving partner, protective and he treats the fml as best as he can ❤

Improvements:
I found the book quite fast-paced though (this is just my preference, others do find it just fine) and some parts can be traded for the 'show' rather than the 'tell'. Like the parts where Sam was treated badly by her parents and the part where she first discovers about her wolf. It'll be more interesting to see snippets of the incidents rather than having Sam simply telling it to William and the reader. And I find some supposedly big matters are like…uhm easily accepted for some characters? Could be fleshed out better if there's more build-up for the characters' personality, reaction and emotion.

Conclusion:
I'm sorry this is not much of a positive review, please don't be disheartened or mad author 😥 I feel like I have to share this because I believe this book has great potential! The concept and idea are unique after all (I really love the notion of her emotional epilepsy) ❤

And overall, it's still a good book. It has some flaws (doesn't hinder the reading tho) but hey every book has that what? Even my writing has lots of flaws. So readers, don't pass the chance and give this book a try!

It's Good 👍

I don't know much about poetry, but this one is pretty nice. The language used is simple and direct and the message the author wants to try to convey is not complicated. And every poem in this book always has some kind of value and morality it's trying to tell us reader. Got grammatical errors but nothing that can't be fixed^^ Overall good job author, keep learning and keep writing more of 'em poems ❤

Simply *chef kiss*

First of all, lemme tell you this. I'm not the type to give five stars on the overall rating of a novel, but this book just freaking deserves it! 🥰🥰🥰

Gosh, where to start? I love it, it's fantastic, the perfect moment of romance (which we still need more! It's not enuf buddy), good character flesh up, love the jokes, likeable personalities for the main cast, nicely-written description and tension and mystery build-up is awesomely paced 👍❤ oh talking about pace, the pacing of the story is also perfect for me. Not to fast, not to slow, just enough to keep you on your toes (hey it's rhyme 😆)

Suggestion on improvement, I'm not sure. I guess there are a few grammar/punctuation errors but it's very little it's almost negligible. Oh and maybe the author can add a bit more descriptions on certain parts but tbh I think the greatly-written description in this book is at the perfect amount already lol pls ignore this comment of mine.
Overall, good job author! I love the book 😍❤👍

Dun dun dun

This story is very interesting! I like the concept of 'ghost Joel' and I definitely didn't see the twists coming 👍

Sentence structuring and description can do better. And there are grammar/punctuation errors but that's normal in every story and the author shows such a good attitude in trying to improve her writing.

Overall, the writing could be improved but it's an intriguing story with its own charm and mysterious bits 😊❤

What will happen next?

Ok first of all let me start by saying I don't know much about BTS. But the storyline and the setting of the story is really intriguing! I like the concept and I like that the mc is not a weak-willed woman. She got her own spunk!
Like most of the stories in Inkitt, it has grammar/punctuation errors but nothing too much that can hinder the reading 😉
Still, this is an interesting story, so try it! 😆❤

Niceeee 😳❤

Good story 👍 I like the concept and the setting. Your description is nicely written too imo. I mean it could be improved or added some more on certain parts but I think your writing style fits with the story's setting and pace. And I love the mystery vibe too, always love to see that in a story ❤❤❤ a few grammar/punctuation errors but nothing that can't be fixed :)

I Like the Plot

The story is interesting, I love that the plot is quite different from the usual kind of story I always read. I like the concept of the King game too, it'll be fun to see how the Blake character will be treated if our mc win the game and become the temporary King (beat him please lol).

On a side note, the grammar and wordings need a lot of improvement cause I have to admit, it's rather difficult for me to understand the reading at first. But I have to commend the author for having the courage to try and write a story that isn't in their native language. I know how hard that is hun 🥺 heck even my grammar is a disaster.

Sorry if my review isn't really the most positive one. Don't let it discourage you, cause I'm sure you can write well with more practices. And your story has potential too, so go for it girl! Btw here some 🍪🍪🍪 Sorry again if my review disheartens you.

Freaking Read This!

Exactly as my title said.
Read the damn book! You'll not regret it. Here, take my virtual 50 dollars if you think I'm lying.

So far, I've never given a full star rating for the stories in Inkitt, but this one deserves it. It's a great one-shot horror which will take you inside the mind of a mad man. I love the writing since it's simple and not overly complicated, but it'll still able to grab your attention and make you engage with the reading. Grammar is also fine, I can't spot any errors and if there's one, it might be freaking little.

So yeah, give this book a chance, I mean, have you seen the summary? It's interesting ok. You will like this story as I do :)

Love The Mood

It has only been 3 chapters, so I can't deduce much. But, from what I can garner so far, the book feels relaxing and no overdramatic, complicated, life-and-death issues to make your head and heart stressed out. The grammar and writing are really good, trust me. It's simple and lovely.

I like the characters so far and I feel like the main couple's romance would be great with the good old slow burn and cute moments. And I love that Max as a character is someone with his own problem rather than just focusing on the mate stuff. He got his own dream and challenges that he has to face.

Overall, great book. And you'll love it if you like a cute love story.

It's just that good.

Where should I start? I'm not good with writing review actually since I rarely make one. But let me say this, your writing is beautiful, damn gripping and I can already have a vivid imagination on the setting, character and the emotion.

I try to see which part I can comment for improvement but I couldn't really see one (or I'm just too lacking in the writing department to notice it) aside from really minor grammar errors and sentences break that could do better.

And this is more of my own personal preference, but I think on the start of chapter 2, I was like 'omg what happen next I need to see' but the description of the character situation and her viewpoint (which is greatly crafted) was very tiny little dragging it kinda made my mood go 'girl hurry up we need to see what happen'. You got what I'm trying to say here haha? But this could be my mood alone cause I've always been the impatient/rushing type when it comes to horror stuff.

Overall, good job author! Really great writing for horror story since it's engaging and the mood is built nicely. Your vocab and writing are so good it made me feel like mine was written by a 3rd grader trying to write her first fantasy story to impress her parents ;_;