notably excitable & leaves a desire for more
Overall I found this very easy to read because of how enjoyable it was. First-person present-tense is very difficult to write in but can reap the most rewards for connecting with the reader, and that it what you'll find here.
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I feel like there could be a little more development with the plot prior to the selection ceremony, but that is just my personal opinion. I loved the writing style the most and the overall idea of the story is captivating. Punctuation and grammar were not perfect, but it's not consistent and warrants over-looking.
I enjoyed this a lot and cannot wait for the next chapter to be put up!