Mbali

By God's Grace.

I write to inspire, I write to create, create a world without bounds and characters without limitation, a reflection of what we can all be.

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A page-turner

I have never said this before. But you have most elegant writing I have seen. Your descriptions are so gracefully written with finesse and attached with comical features. It's engaging and read for all and all to read!☆

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Whoa, just Whoa!

All I felt was goosebumps, cold chills spiking the hairs on the back of my neck! I love that it begun in the thrill of it so I was immediately gripped, and i feel like my screen opened into a portal and your writing not only transported me to your created world but I felt everything, I could smell the coppery scent of blood and hear the bloodcurdling screams, Insane!

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Poetic ingenious

I have not felt this in while but my heart was warmed by the stanzas, the concept of the "futile layers" the beauty in perfection and something more behind perceived flaws. I am not a moshy, maudlin type but this is simply beautiful, heartening piece of literature because write some more, so all of our hearts can continue to be warmed :)

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Poignant.

The power of first person narration is that it has something third person and other styles do not have which is that in depth personal connection with the reader and protagonist, we see the world through her eyes, we feel her emotions and share her pain. The authenticity really shines in this and that is what I love most about this so far. But from what I see so far, you are budding writer, just keep writing :)

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Bewitching!

I love the authenticity of the character and the beginning sense of relateability in the sense that of someone unseen is fatefully chosen. Truly impeccable. The book is amazing Cat!

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Besotted!!!

Wow! Wow! Its been such a long time since I have fangirled over a character. She is BADASS. This is exceptionally well written with a noteworthy character development and well versed since normally stories like this are male character dominated by not with this one. I am fawning, amazing work Hannah!

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Refreshing!

Although this might be Star Wars inspired. This has definitely taken a life of its own, branching into new elements, beings and concepts. The Son of Mandalore is resplendently written in its descriptions, a way that gives vision and paints a picture on the blank canvas of our minds, a picture of wars, plunder and feats. I am pleased that its not one of the typical fan, spin-offs but like my own story. You have weaved your own that is astronomically well-written. I salute you, Gabriel!

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Mindbogglingly Phenomenal!

From the moment, I started,rapt in this story unraveled by this old man and the story-line is completely and utterly phenomenal. The words I want to use, have not even been invented yet. I love the character development, the vivid descriptions of Darlene's laissez faire demeanor and its just so all riveting as well as the humorous remarks and comical thoughts. This book truly is beautifully written with a revolutionary story-line. This is the first book out of many that I have reviewed and this is the first one that I have five-stared and it is not that difficult to see why.

Highly recommendable if you are into simply stellar and amazing novellas. Good show, Mr Wolf, good show!

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Riveting!

I literally had to pull myself away in order to write this review because the story-line is done in such a way that its refreshing, relate-able and simply unassailable. The play on fate where two paths sever only to intertwined in a new way. Amazing work, please...whatever you do....write on!

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Proficient writing.

From what I have read so far, there are two defining traits of an author, story-line and the execution of it and you have a powerful plot-line and the way in which you devise it, expounding on characters, feelings and emotions. Nice work.

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Revoluntionary

i have never encountered something so ingenious and different to author a book from an animals point of view, to exhibit the destruction of environmentalism from their eyes. Truly inspirational in sense that you are spreading awareness under a guise of a creative novella!

Stellar!

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ENTRALLING

I am obsessed. I love the character development of Elana, apart from the plot of a story, characters bring it to life and that's what you did! I have read many books of this genre on wattpad, countless of them but none compare to this!

If you are reading this review, waste no more time and read Broken Nightmare!!

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Stellar!

I am astounded, mentally mind-wrapped and my eyes are strung wide. unable to even blink to miss a word. Kyla Black is quite a staunch character, to endure what she goes through in the orphanage. A character to be adulated. In a wholestic overview, I commend the rawness of your words and boldness about your story in general sense that it even raises awareness beyond the screen but to the world we live in. Amazing work!

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INCREDIBLE!

I WANT MORE! UPDATE!!! excuse my fanatics, forgive me but that was extraordinary, simply and utterly and purely extraordinary. Normally I would break down into particulars what I love about a story from the plot, to the characters and writing style but its too difficult because I literally loved...everything, please. Sunday is too far, I must know what happens next!

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Brilliant.

Emotive language that evokes emotions and vivid imagery and descriptions that you can explicitly see and almost feel! I adore writing styles that are able to capture each moment and paint such a image in a readers mind, amazing work!

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Superb!

Brooding....in this introspective founded story, its quite brazen, bold and fearlessly written in the sense that the author strikingly composes the story, the dialogue, the deep gnawing questions. Quite a phenomenal read!

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Amazing!

What a resplendent contradictions between life and death.! From the prologue, I felt literal chills running down my spine, my goodness, your descriptions are proficiently explained and by far I saw little to no technical errors which is exceedingly rare. You have done a brilliant job here, superb work!

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Outstanding

You have truly erected a world in which is unparalleled in creativity with well versed character development , there are some brazen concepts and simply refreshing in its ingenuity. Love it!

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Fantastic!

LONG LIVE THE KING!

With the king dead, who shall take the throne? Rien or Riena! the courtly affairs and kingdom dynamics has me reading with my nose pressed to the screen, ogling at every word written. This is as spectacular and well-written as I thought it would be!

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Stellar!

Powerful beginning! You have expertly managed to hone a skill that grips a reader from the get go and wants them wanting for more, at least I do. Exceedingly gripping and easy to immerse in the moment, though all the surges of emotions. Stellar work!

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Magnificent!

I can not to begin to fathom, my unworthy mind cannot seem to comprehend the scale of this book’s grandeur. This story is evolved from the average supernatural narrative, into something more, something beyond such mediocracy. The ingenious that is the Lazariene.

James, I salute you. You are undoubtedly gifted, talented in your craft. Your writing style is strikingly written, your descriptions vivid and concepts innovative. Truly inspiring!

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A stunner!

First off, the beginning…exquisite. I adulate the protagonists perspective, she is relatable and her applicable mindset about her vision on her future, her expectations, though I disagree. Your dreams can never be too high; one just needs to reach further. Overall this is a splendid read and I can’t wait to immerse myself, deeper!

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Incredible!

Wow, this is in inimitable writing structure, it feels as if I am reading a screenplay! I absolutely adore this incredible plotline, it has me bursting with conjectures of that single rose painting, does it symbolise Kamari’s Rose, rose? The one he left behind to chase greater heights? Such deep philosophies tied with just one symbolism. I am fawning. Please, write on!

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Fantastic!

This is definitely well-versed! It took me by surprise! The rawness of it is astounding and it draw me in because ,my interests was peaked...I Wanted to know more, which kept me reading, kept me wanting more! Incredible!!

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Enthralling!

This is prolific as I imagined it to be with the ingenious story line that builds steadily into the rising action of the plotline and not to mention to ingenious concepts, a innovative story written by a dexterous author that was able to plunge me light-years ahead into a realm of fantasy and sci-fi so beautifully entwined.

Stellar!

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Amazing!!

This is genuinely a unique take many write about dragons but none from a dragons perspective, thoughts and life. Definitely a fascinating plotline. Destiny is by far the most beautiful dragon and I think its my bias because shes my favorite colour. I love it.!!

Nice work!

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BEWITCHING!

This book had me. SPELLBOUND. I physically could not stop myself from scrolling on further and further and before i knew it, chapters had flown by. At a wholestic overview, i love the sense of the whole folklore and myths and in the heart of it all, lies the truth. A truth.

First off. I love that there is such complexity in your writing, in just simplicity, by the fact that you can feel the fear when she first meets Argennis and the anger simmering during her investigation with Ian Henry. I love how Toi was able to flip the table on his so easily, shes so cheeky and feisty and fierce. How she challenges him about what qualifies one to be human...it out flesh or is it the traits of our perceived humanity that makes us human? This is wonderfully written. I want to see this as the bestseller by the end of the month and I adore the humorous banter between May and Leon. Classic!

I can ramble pages on about my love for this story, please do one the favor and update. update.

This is stellar work!!

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Flames!

This book is fire!. I love how it starts with this relatable mundane life that is work. The protagonist is taken from a tedious realm of work and whisked into this fantasy world of pure excitement and exhilaration that makes a reader cling to ever word. There are contextual and grammatic errors but they are easy fixes.

Wonderful!☆

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Truly smitten.

Ah love, the reason why we do things we never thought we ever could, abandoning all sense of rationality and practicality. Which describes my unfathomable admiration for your writing, the conversationalist tone weaved in with good descriptions and evoking vocabulary.

Bloody fantastic!

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Majestic!

There was nothing holding me back for reading more, till the end! You can feel the flood of raw emotions that overflows in the literary composition, I love when I can tap into the sensations, feel everything by reading words beautifully, boldly strung together

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Marvellous

I commend the steady pace, the ascent to the climax of the story that unfurls, the hints subtly dropped for readers to notice and digest, really kept me scrolling and clamoring for more, to know more. Absolutely marvelous!

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Astounding!

Relate.
Natural.
Powerful.

Three elements that I felt entwined nicely in this book. The dexterity of the Alyssa, the protagonist to forge foreword, meek yet so valiant. The conversations were natural, and flows smoothly, something so simple that is so proficiently executed. I love the relatebility that this story reflects in almost every ones life.

Nice!

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Brilliant.

I love the ingenious concepts!! truly unparraled in the regards as to the development of authoring this world of blood hunters and witches alike, done with neat precision and few omissions and technical errors.

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Alluring!

In my perspective I am utterly enticed by storylines that have characters that have this guard's and walls and facades up but there is always that one that breaks through those walls and unpeels those fascades and that is what Jax is to Coralee, exceptionally marvellous

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Engaging!

Oh my, what a laugh I had, these very intriguing, aspiring gangsters, it is always refreshing to read a humorous plot with naturally a comical writing style, love!

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Mind blowing, Remi.

This story is brazenly raw, emotionally evoking and to start by acknowledging how you begun your book. It was a powerful start, the hallowed scriptures definitely echoed the deep, philosophical and stirring sentiments that is rippled throughout the book. I am shook, shaken and simply obsessed!

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Thrilling!

Jase can't have him because Xavier is mine! I am besotted with the character development of the protagonist a kind that you love to hate but hate to love and love to...simply love. I saw the underlining. beneath the surface tensions you create is very effective between the characters. Good show, Mr grey. Good show.

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Superb!

From what I have read so far, you have a gripping writing style that instantly adsorbs and hooks a reader like I was enthralled first way in, your vivid descriptions make it easy to envision and to feel. Nice work!

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Distinctive

This is exceptionally idiosyncratic storyline, definitely a new and bold take on this kind of theme. There a quite a few grammatical errors that can be easily remedied but I do enjoy the kind of characters that as the story progress, there are layers peeled off and you get to know the characters in depth. I admire that., write on!

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Proficient

The writing is divinely described and the descriptions sort of unravel before a reader in which you can easily transport yourself there, in that moment in that scene, almost going though the emotions of the charters. Nice work!

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Enthralling!

I love this kind of science fiction where it predicts a possible Providence of earth. I am raving over the characters that are so profoundly described and brought to life. Write on my dear.!

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Resplendent

I never quite understood the expression. "Beauty in simplicity" But from reading this, now I do. The rawness of the writing style opens this door to the reader of seeing the characters truest and deepest truths, you have a great untapped potential, you a blossoming writer, my dear.

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Authentic.

I have commented on writing styles and the foundation of other authors story lines but this is the first where I am drawn to the authenticity of it, the display of raw emotions and the descriptiveness towards the characters perception and feelings. There are grammatical errors which are easily remedied with a fine comb of editing but I truly admire the spurious approach to this book. Nice work.

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Fantastic!

Whoa, whoa like to be frank, I do not ever indulge in zombie books but this one...was definitely worth the risk on reading. I love how the story did not dawdle, it was a good, snap pace to the rising action and then the Climactic pinnacle, every reader craves which is the action, the dread and all of those fear-inducing sensations. Truly admirable!

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Appealing!

This is completely innovating writing style that abides to no conventional, implicit laws of writing, the style is unrestricted and sovereign. The dialogue is emphasized a lot in way that it is humorous and engaging. Definitely had my few rounds of laugh, a few grammatical errors need to be ironed out but all on all. Very winsome.

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Powerful!

My dear, I do not think you grasp the power of our plot-line, a plot-line that has ripped throughout the chronicles of our history which you have brilliantly used to echo it into the future, the writing structure is very...unique, expansive and Bold. In a way that it sort of mirrors the essence of the story, the protagonist woeful notarial whilst reminiscing of his parents and the burning desire to apprehend the ones responsible for taking them from him. Just well done.

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Simply Winsome.

I really enjoyed the narration of this book, the colloquialism of it and that I felt like...the protagonist is engaging with us and journeying us through their story and this m preferred narrative because it makes a reader feel like we're there with the characters and in the whole mix of things, very cute. I know its a weird adjective but it is, unblemished, unadulterated cuteness. Its a yes from me, lol.

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Brilliant!!

I feel like this werewolf story is definitely more evolved than the ones i have read in the past, the writing style more layered and descriptive and I love the humor of the protagonist. I've read so many werewolf stories but this was definitely refreshing, well written and well versed. Something I am clamoring more for!

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Gripping

I am besotted with the enthralling writing, once I begun reading I was already transported to this new world, visualizing everything and feeling everything from the viewpoint of the protagonist, so well written and can I just say I really admire the creative titling. So if you excuse me....I'm going to go read some more!

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Ironclad writing!

Gosh, how I adore a fierce protagonist. From what I have read so far, you have made a strong character development which is very suited to the title of the book and can I say just say I love the humor, the side notes and internal thoughts. Please...write on!

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Well-written

I love the first person narration style, the quirkiness imbued with the writing correlates with the high school scene and there some definitely interesting concepts and beings like the blackeyes. Black Claw is most definitely a school I wish I could attend. Nice work!

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Communal Writer!

I love this kind of writing where it feels like reader is with the characters, its not like the average storytelling but experiencing it firsthand, i loved the inclusivity of it, of how it is written and your taking us as the reader on a journey that you have authored. Nice job, a few technical errors but easy to remedy!

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Fascinating

I love the strong, female protagonist, the past and presence is a complex writing style and it does need to be refined but you do it very well, write on darling, write on! Very intriguing story-line.

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Resplendent!

The very start is gripping, can i just say that i adore your emotive language, that you so well managed to gauge raw emotions of the victims, the fear and the feelings, truly extraordinary, most writers like to focus one the sensory elements of a story but you explicitly expounded on the sentiments and the sensations.

WELL DONE!!

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Enthralling

This sci-fi definitely resonated with the most, I love the concept of the novella that really raises a scientific debate, super intriguing and recommendable for anyone who likes a good read, well done :)

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Captivating

Thank you so much that this was no cliche, it was a different and in a way it reminded me of the movie called Prince of Persia, I love it and I am going to go continue reading! :)

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Fascinating!

I so loved the whole female James Bond vibe, wonder woman meets a m4 rifle. It was astronomicalley enthralling, the plot was well versed. Nice job!

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Refreshing.

I really appreciate the authenticity of your writing style, it also has a way of engaging a reader. Normally i take note of the plot or charters but i sincerely like the style of writing, refreshing !

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Captivating.

Please, write more! whatever you do, eat sleep and write because you have a distinctive gift, even from the start I was rapt with this dystopia ambiance and I love this concept of this alpha generation!

Fascinating!

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Tantalizing.

Well I was rapt from the beginning, Definitely find it gripping and if you excuse me, I am going to go read some more of it.

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