Mbali x

Stellar!!

I am besotted with the way you have written a reflection of society and the unfair laws of misanthropy that was stellar and they way you write is so immersive it isn't too complex but no overly simplicity but it's this beautiful meld of both that absorbs a reader and allows for them to part of the world you are creating and the story you narrating.

But first... Mr Charls though (frantically squirms in bed)

I love Ria she's so relatable!

Stellar!!

I'm about halfway but I just had to hit a pause and commend the way you wrote this! The writing structure that so perfectly reflects the internal conflict of the other one.Her. Trying to break free, taunting, threatening and pushing. Like I am shook!!!

I am truly impressed at how you weaved the plot-line and your writing style to the story. Wow!

Excellent!

First time, I am saying this to anyone. You can even look at the hundred reviews I have on my profile and only yours I can say, has a proficient writing structure. One authored like a published book. It mirrors the works of professional writers and I am truly impressed at the cohesion between the protagonist's thoughts and realizations that flows with the pace of the story. Writing is pictorial, so I was able to visualize everything you were writing so it was so much easier to immerse myself into the word you have recreated.

LONG LIVE THE MAGE QUEEN

Well-written

I admire the retrospective reflection of this, the poetic composition really goes deep into the core of heartbreak and the pain one feels, I also love the short and sweet structure, I also think it adds to the aesthetic to the 'break' part since it was so well-fragmented, it wasn't long .

Keep on writing.

Captivating!

I will be writing two reviews one for now and one when conclude the book because can I just say, I love your pictorial writing sense, your writing reflects the ambiance of the scene, the emotions and feelings and let me tell you. I loath romance books because their always cliche, predictable or unrealistic but what you have written is desirable, it goes deeper than just eroticism but the core of romance that is slow and its making me feel fuzzy feelings and I hate it! You have truly written quite the piece here, I'm excited to read more.

Steady intrigue

This was definitely something else! You had my mind warped in this world you created and this dilemma you have forged. You have quite the building abilities in a sense that its steady, not rushed and a goody steady climb to the rising action where picks up, smoothens and ascends to the climax. I really admire than in your style of writing.

Enthralling!

Oh my word, Im still reading this and will leave anther review after the end of the book but this book is so fascinating! I love kelly shes so raw and relatable the character development is so strong and well written, you have a really good plotline here!

Fascinatingly immersive

This is a diamond among gems. I love the structure in which you lay it out and describe the culture and showcase the way of the worlds, its informative, it draws you in and makes you truly believe that Euthoia (excuse my spelling ) It exists. It's not long, its flashy, pungent and striking so its easy to read and easy to immerse yourself. I truly love it! I really admire your style and hope that more read it. You have written literary gold!

Poetic beauty.

First of I love the stanzas about "Alone doesn’t mean loneliness " It resonates with me so much because I feel the same, alone is where I feel the most free, free to be me and do me with the tranquility of silence, no eyes to stare and no facades to uphold.

I love the poetic composition you have written because it truly is heartfelt.

Smiling the whole way through.

I love anything that has to do with the Japanese, particularly the era of the imperial dynasties and so forth and this is most definitely an innovative story to bring that history back to life (see what I did there. #ressurection) I am obsessed with your writing, it wasn't overly complex but it was so pictorial the way you described everything, right down to the weather, vivid imagery and it immerses a reader. Fantastic work!

Heart-throb.

You were thrumming the strings of my heart! You ticked every box a classic like this has and you did it almost effortlessly, your descriptions and the time shifts which was exeacuted very well and a lot of writers struggle with that but you did it well. Well done!

Superb!!

You own a strong protagonist tat builds a strong story. Even The way its written
well developed. Wow, I look foreword to seeing more of your work!

Brilliant!

Are you aware that you have written something so idiosyncratic, innovative and something never before seen. At least I haven't. A Tribrid, a being belonging to three different creatures, three in one. Its genius...and dangerous! I was skeptical reading this at first but as I begun...I could not stop, your structure of the protagonist explaining her callous farther and then flowing into the chapter of describing her mother. Your writing is so cohesive, it blends well, its not excessive or too little. You write enough to create this narrative but also allow for the readers mind to roam free and envisions.

Kudos, Chloe!
Keep on writing!

Terrific!

Anaxa is hardcore! Goodness I am truly in the presence of a prolific writer, Your descriptions are unfathomably well-written and vivid, I could, almost too easily, envision everything but every etched word, I am truly, truly, overhwhelmingly impressed. This is magnificent book and if you will excuse me...I am going to go read some more of it!

Phenomenal!

My, my. The innovative creative levels of this book, blows my mind! The ingenious concepts, brazen characters. You have done a stellar job. You managed to combine, humour and all these admirable elements interwoven into your story, its so prolific and stunningly well-written! Stellar job!

Splendid work!

OOOO!
I would literally die if I was in Bill's situation. I am exceedingly impressed by your prolific writing skills and the eerie ambiance you create in such a short space of time, along with the pandemonium of confusion he awakens to! Wow, I didn't feel like I was reading at all! I could vividly envision the scene, the protagonists actions, I felt as if I was watching a film!

INCREDIBLE!

I WANT MORE! UPDATE!!! excuse my fanatics, forgive me but that was extraordinary, simply and utterly and purely extraordinary. Normally I would break down into particulars what I love about a story from the plot, to the characters and writing style but its too difficult because I literally loved...everything, please. Sunday is too far, I must know what happens next!

Superb!

Brooding....in this introspective founded story, its quite brazen, bold and fearlessly written in the sense that the author strikingly composes the story, the dialogue, the deep gnawing questions. Quite a phenomenal read!

Poetic ingenious

I have not felt this in while but my heart was warmed by the stanzas, the concept of the "futile layers" the beauty in perfection and something more behind perceived flaws. I am not a moshy, maudlin type but this is simply beautiful, heartening piece of literature because write some more, so all of our hearts can continue to be warmed :)

Poignant.

The power of first person narration is that it has something third person and other styles do not have which is that in depth personal connection with the reader and protagonist, we see the world through her eyes, we feel her emotions and share her pain. The authenticity really shines in this and that is what I love most about this so far. But from what I see so far, you are budding writer, just keep writing :)

Besotted!!!

Wow! Wow! Its been such a long time since I have fangirled over a character. She is BADASS. This is exceptionally well written with a noteworthy character development and well versed since normally stories like this are male character dominated by not with this one. I am fawning, amazing work Hannah!

Refreshing!

Although this might be Star Wars inspired. This has definitely taken a life of its own, branching into new elements, beings and concepts. The Son of Mandalore is resplendently written in its descriptions, a way that gives vision and paints a picture on the blank canvas of our minds, a picture of wars, plunder and feats. I am pleased that its not one of the typical fan, spin-offs but like my own story. You have weaved your own that is astronomically well-written. I salute you, Gabriel!

Mindbogglingly Phenomenal!

From the moment, I started,rapt in this story unraveled by this old man and the story-line is completely and utterly phenomenal. The words I want to use, have not even been invented yet. I love the character development, the vivid descriptions of Darlene's laissez faire demeanor and its just so all riveting as well as the humorous remarks and comical thoughts. This book truly is beautifully written with a revolutionary story-line. This is the first book out of many that I have reviewed and this is the first one that I have five-stared and it is not that difficult to see why.

Highly recommendable if you are into simply stellar and amazing novellas. Good show, Mr Wolf, good show!

Communal Writer!

I love this kind of writing where it feels like reader is with the characters, its not like the average storytelling but experiencing it firsthand, i loved the inclusivity of it, of how it is written and your taking us as the reader on a journey that you have authored. Nice job, a few technical errors but easy to remedy!

Proficient writing.

From what I have read so far, there are two defining traits of an author, story-line and the execution of it and you have a powerful plot-line and the way in which you devise it, expounding on characters, feelings and emotions. Nice work.

Revoluntionary

i have never encountered something so ingenious and different to author a book from an animals point of view, to exhibit the destruction of environmentalism from their eyes. Truly inspirational in sense that you are spreading awareness under a guise of a creative novella!

Stellar!

ENTRALLING

I am obsessed. I love the character development of Elana, apart from the plot of a story, characters bring it to life and that's what you did! I have read many books of this genre on wattpad, countless of them but none compare to this!

If you are reading this review, waste no more time and read Broken Nightmare!!

Loved. Loved Loved!

I generally never review a book that isn't more that 6 chapters in length, at least. But I am enamored with this story and the simplistic yet refined writing, vivid and immersive. And I need to know more, so I hope you update soon!!

Ensnares you with fascination.

I read that in record time because it is that enthralling. Seriously, the characters are just so darn lovable. Uncle Rick, Wes and little Jax is the cutest.

Ella, my dear.I hope you update soon! xx

Fantastic!

I really wished I read this sooner! Your writing style is the kind that I but hard copies of. I adore birdy, the quirky protagonist, with may I say has great taste in books. I must commend your pictorial writing style that is adeptly descriptive but not complex and daunting. Its cohesive and flows so serenely and perfectly that immerse a reader, paints a picture and transport us on this journey with the characters. A very cinematic experience. And often relatable factors.

Adrian: "Do not engage! Do not engage! Count to ten!"
You have no idea how much I had to chant that to myself, especially in my senior years of high school.

You honestly have such a refined talent, and the writing was high level. A simplicity that resonates with readers to find themselves almost similar to them and the proficiency to show a completely original story.

You have what it takes to make it big, top bestseller in amazon and net-lix adaptations, if you continue to write has you do. Your own voice and style but always keep evolving because there's always room for improvement.

Stellar work, Gracie.

Distinctive!

Fascinating writing structure its like a screenplay, a very cinematic feel to it which really highlights your amorphous plot-line very well!

Deserves more than 5-stars

I am truly astounded. I was told in AS English class, Cambridge. that writing from a child's perspective is one of the most difficult perspective to proficiently author and you have done a brilliantly excellent execution of it. The innocence of the protagonist that maturely showcases what is happening with the plot. Wow, I am impressed how you adeptly wrote it in a innocent perception of a child. I am bested at how you decided to write this plot line. Excellent

Superlative.

So I am no poet expert, and I feel you cannot critique poems because their a written reflection of the writers heart and inner most emotions and beings but I adore your stanzas and the personifications you use especially with the pillows, surrounding as a shoulder to cry on, chest to lean on e.t.c but to fully grasp your writing capabilities I am going to need for you to write me, you have raw potential, all you need to do is to refine it by practicing; writing and writing some more. I do love the poetic composition you have written but like I said I am no expert but it was in my IGCSE Cambridge syllabus, what I learnt from that, years ago. Always have cohesion, the stanzas must wind and flow like a river and I feel so far that yours does, as I said. I do need to read more to assess it better.

Intriguing

Interesting, I am intrigued. I hope you update soon, so I can review it in its entirety. But so far so good!

Fascinating!!

This is exceptional! I have read probably a thousand werewolf books from wattpad and even here on Inkitt and this is the first time I am reading a plot like this one! and one so well-written. The war of the wolves, what a captivating story , I thoroughly enjoyed Wolf War 1 and I hope to see more so I hope you update more!

A page-turner

This is a really gripping plot line! I love the way the author writes, its pictorial and easy to immerse oneself into and I adore the new supernatural elements interleaved into, I feel as it was nicely done, there are few technical issues but their minor as the story and the execution over it overshadows it greatly, you have potential to be great writer, beyond inkitt. So keep on writing.

Superb.

I like to begin with my first review and then my second will come at the end, the culmination of the book to see the development.

But as for the beginning I am truly hooked, I love your pictorial style of writing in which I can easily envision everything and effortlessly immerse myself into your world and you have built strong charater development which I like to say builds a strong plotline as well so I am in intrigued and will be delightedly continuing onwards! x

Nice work.

I love that this was definitely a different twist to the monotonous werewolf plotline, you really made it your own and I love the character development, I relate well with Mckenzie, so it was easy to immerse myself into the story because I became so bonded with the characters so well done

Bloody brilliant!

My heart was pounding as this thing was nearing towards poor old Cedric filled with paralysing fear! I am disappointed, though.... that they are only three chapters! I must know more! This story is exceptionally brilliant, kept me on the edge of the seat and out of all the books I have read they did not have me clinging to suspense as you did.

Godspeed to Cedric .

I salute Mr Evans, jolly good show.

Fantastic!

I thoroughly enjoyed this! Never failed to keep me hooked throughout the chapters, enthralling and engaging I love the bond shown between the protagonist and her brother, simply refreshing!

Some grammatical and spelling errors but are minor.

Innovative!

I love the start of your book with the existential beginning of poetic elements and lyric that really gives puts your book on a pedestal of ingenuity and then it flows into the main story, sort of like a deep, reflection and foreshadowing of what is coming, so I really admire that!

Fantastic!

Aww!!

I love Kyle.
I adore your conversationalist writing, its immersive and makes you feel that you are with the protagonist feeling his emotions with him, it draws sympathy; you share frustrations and I absolutely like it. There was a book I read a few years by James Patterson and I was besotted with it and I never thought I would find one similar to it again but then I came across yours and it's filled with just nostalgic bliss so thank you!

Great job!

First you have a very enthralling storyline, and your writing is very pictorial which is an excellent skill to have in which it easily immerses a reader into your book but your character development isn't as pungent enough to to bond with the protagonist and and grammatical issues, minor but all in all I enjoyed

Distinctive

I love Avatar air bender and all the elements involved so I know I would already be a huge fan but you definitely made a different, unique and a innovative take on it and I always wanted to know what was the best element, the strongest out all four and you show what. NIce x

Black is poetic

A single tear slipped from eye.

This is raw and bold and I feel like you are bearing your heart and giving us a slither of your soul and dispelling your pain, I cannot review a poem that is a reflection of how someone feels because how can one critique that but I can say how morosely poetic you are, the vivid imagery, the repetition to repeat and emphases those gnawing words and the case of depression that you have so darkly yet resplendently portrayed through the pain etched in your words

Engaging!

You have a strong story here, but the execution might needs to refined in the sense of a better character development and having a more pictorial writing to fully immerse your reader. That’s my only critique but your story is suspenful, captivating and I love the existential contradictions of the light and darkness, emotion being conveyed as weakness. Good job!

I couldn't stop smiling.

It has been a long time since I have fallen in love with a protagonist. I simply adore Ivy!
I love your pictorial writing style in which you can explicitly envision what you are writing without being excessive and complex but its cohesively written and allows a reader to flow though the story and journey with the characters. Keep up the amazing work!

Stellar!

Your book is stellar and I need to specifically applaud your vivid descriptions because of that I so easily immersed myself into the book and saw and felt everything through Jennifer's eyes but I do suggest just in a few minor parts that instead of telling. For example.

"My outfit consists of..."
Try demonstrating it and show your readers like "I drew on a pair of skinny jeans or I slipped on a red shirt" Just a generic example I am making but other than that. Brilliant. A really captivating plot line.

Innovative

You have quite the distinctive writing style, unique and different and definitely differentiates you from most authors which is a huge advantage. Very interactive ambience to it with the bold dialogue and descriptions attached to it. The story of Chyrsandra is unlike what I have seen and that is a rare achievement to obtain. So well done.

Astronomical potential

I adore the concept of your story, the plot and the core of it, extremely riveting in conception but I would liked to have seen more of the origins and got a sense of the full extent of the cataclysmic event that redefined the rest of their providence and besides a few grammatical errors. You have a story with great potential.

Resplendent.

You provoked my emotions! I just wanted to reach into my screen and grab Jack! Thats excellent, the art of emotive, evoking language to astir a readers emotion. Its a timeless gifting in which you do very well. Bravo! I totally love Irena BTW.

Raw.

You have done something, I have not seen in a long time about the use and potrayel of emotions which is maudlin and simply poignant. Your cohesion of writing is admirable and your descriptions, unique, it seperates you from most authors, use it to your advantage.

A page-turner.

Your style of writing is truly something to envy. I love the vivid imagery and powerful, existential beginning at the start. Your story and your writing does not dissapoint or becomes jaded but it keeps one attentive, piqued and wanting more.

Fantastic!

Your majesty.
"Bows my head before A.King.*

You have created something so conceptually brilliant! Your beginning is powerful, gripping and entralling and a good reveal of charater, no-one can compare, your highness. I would surely recommand it, a great riveting read!

Go on!

It cannot be. No. I need more, the blank spaces cultivates, the mysteriousness of it all. Which either leads a reader confused or wanting to know more and believe me. I need to know more so I implore you to write on!

Nice work

Your story as an abundant potential, compelling and interesting but I advise on more ckarater development because if you ave a stronj carater, protanist. You ave a stron plot. All in all, I sawy well done. I love tis concept of Tekna and some factors about Mia.

Brilliant.

Your writing really emphasis beauty in simplicity. Your writing creates imagery and it takes one a journey.despite its a common genre. You ave made it your own. Well done!

A breath of fresh air.

Refreshing! I commend you, no I salute you for not writing anther cliche. This romance novel you have formed is raw and real. I love the protagonist and the structure of how you write, the themes you mention, its so authentic and relateable which easily engages a reader as it has with me. Stellar. I look foreword to seeing more of your works.

Fantastic!

I just want to take a moment to applaud your technical skills. I have written many reviews, and read many books and all were good but it is very rare to come across a book that has rare grammatical issues, so for a starters I am highly impressed it affirms your proficiency and as the story as a whole, brilliant. The protagonist transition,Loved it! xx

Excellent.

Lol I kind of like Chad, his persistence is admirable. Your writing style is so charismatic in a relateable sense that I was neither intimidated or put off but I was enthralled, Your work is well written and well versed. Well done!!

Spectacular!

This book is exactly what I thought it would be....heart-wrenchingly beautiful, brimming with raw emotions that is written though out the book. The bond between Oceana and her brother makes me wish I had a sibling, so sweet and heart warming, brilliant work.

Outstanding!

Samantha is such a staunch character, well-developed a strong and resilient protagonist in the midst of her circumstance, truly admirable. Can I say.....but dam! Taylor is fine though! You have a very pictorial writing in which I can easily envision everything! And feel the reluctance of trying to heave oneself out of bed. Keep up the good work!

The big move!

First off. I need to know more! I hope you plan to update and add more! So far your writing is very descriptive and easily imagine everything with every sentence so its easy to immerse myself and learn more about the characters and the plot as it grows. Its definitely well written.

Fascinating!

First of Drea is my favorite...or Armin, I do love comical characters! Your writing style is absolutely exquisite in the the sense that is so existential, the first person narration style that you have so pristine used to graft these existential questions that the protagonists asks and simply it is a good read with a good blend of humor and seriousness. The character development was wonderfully done. Love it!

Stellar!

I am astounded, mentally mind-wrapped and my eyes are strung wide. unable to even blink to miss a word. Kyla Black is quite a staunch character, to endure what she goes through in the orphanage. A character to be adulated. In a wholestic overview, I commend the rawness of your words and boldness about your story in general sense that it even raises awareness beyond the screen but to the world we live in. Amazing work!

Brilliant.

Emotive language that evokes emotions and vivid imagery and descriptions that you can explicitly see and almost feel! I adore writing styles that are able to capture each moment and paint such a image in a readers mind, amazing work!

Amazing!

What a resplendent contradictions between life and death.! From the prologue, I felt literal chills running down my spine, my goodness, your descriptions are proficiently explained and by far I saw little to no technical errors which is exceedingly rare. You have done a brilliant job here, superb work!

Stellar!

Powerful beginning! You have expertly managed to hone a skill that grips a reader from the get go and wants them wanting for more, at least I do. Exceedingly gripping and easy to immerse in the moment, though all the surges of emotions. Stellar work!

A stunner!

First off, the beginning…exquisite. I adulate the protagonists perspective, she is relatable and her applicable mindset about her vision on her future, her expectations, though I disagree. Your dreams can never be too high; one just needs to reach further. Overall this is a splendid read and I can’t wait to immerse myself, deeper!

Incredible!

Wow, this is in inimitable writing structure, it feels as if I am reading a screenplay! I absolutely adore this incredible plotline, it has me bursting with conjectures of that single rose painting, does it symbolise Kamari’s Rose, rose? The one he left behind to chase greater heights? Such deep philosophies tied with just one symbolism. I am fawning. Please, write on!

Amazing!!

This is genuinely a unique take many write about dragons but none from a dragons perspective, thoughts and life. Definitely a fascinating plotline. Destiny is by far the most beautiful dragon and I think its my bias because shes my favorite colour. I love it.!!

Nice work!

Flames!

This book is fire!. I love how it starts with this relatable mundane life that is work. The protagonist is taken from a tedious realm of work and whisked into this fantasy world of pure excitement and exhilaration that makes a reader cling to ever word. There are contextual and grammatic errors but they are easy fixes.

Wonderful!☆

Truly smitten.

Ah love, the reason why we do things we never thought we ever could, abandoning all sense of rationality and practicality. Which describes my unfathomable admiration for your writing, the conversationalist tone weaved in with good descriptions and evoking vocabulary.

Bloody fantastic!

Majestic!

There was nothing holding me back for reading more, till the end! You can feel the flood of raw emotions that overflows in the literary composition, I love when I can tap into the sensations, feel everything by reading words beautifully, boldly strung together

Marvellous

I commend the steady pace, the ascent to the climax of the story that unfurls, the hints subtly dropped for readers to notice and digest, really kept me scrolling and clamoring for more, to know more. Absolutely marvelous!

Alluring!

In my perspective I am utterly enticed by storylines that have characters that have this guard's and walls and facades up but there is always that one that breaks through those walls and unpeels those fascades and that is what Jax is to Coralee, exceptionally marvellous

Engaging!

Oh my, what a laugh I had, these very intriguing, aspiring gangsters, it is always refreshing to read a humorous plot with naturally a comical writing style, love!

Mind blowing, Remi.

This story is brazenly raw, emotionally evoking and to start by acknowledging how you begun your book. It was a powerful start, the hallowed scriptures definitely echoed the deep, philosophical and stirring sentiments that is rippled throughout the book. I am shook, shaken and simply obsessed!

Thrilling!

Jase can't have him because Xavier is mine! I am besotted with the character development of the protagonist a kind that you love to hate but hate to love and love to...simply love. I saw the underlining. beneath the surface tensions you create is very effective between the characters. Good show, Mr grey. Good show.

Superb!

From what I have read so far, you have a gripping writing style that instantly adsorbs and hooks a reader like I was enthralled first way in, your vivid descriptions make it easy to envision and to feel. Nice work!

Proficient

The writing is divinely described and the descriptions sort of unravel before a reader in which you can easily transport yourself there, in that moment in that scene, almost going though the emotions of the charters. Nice work!

Resplendent

I never quite understood the expression. "Beauty in simplicity" But from reading this, now I do. The rawness of the writing style opens this door to the reader of seeing the characters truest and deepest truths, you have a great untapped potential, you a blossoming writer, my dear.

Fantastic!

Whoa, whoa like to be frank, I do not ever indulge in zombie books but this one...was definitely worth the risk on reading. I love how the story did not dawdle, it was a good, snap pace to the rising action and then the Climactic pinnacle, every reader craves which is the action, the dread and all of those fear-inducing sensations. Truly admirable!

Appealing!

This is completely innovating writing style that abides to no conventional, implicit laws of writing, the style is unrestricted and sovereign. The dialogue is emphasized a lot in way that it is humorous and engaging. Definitely had my few rounds of laugh, a few grammatical errors need to be ironed out but all on all. Very winsome.

Simply Winsome.

I really enjoyed the narration of this book, the colloquialism of it and that I felt like...the protagonist is engaging with us and journeying us through their story and this m preferred narrative because it makes a reader feel like we're there with the characters and in the whole mix of things, very cute. I know its a weird adjective but it is, unblemished, unadulterated cuteness. Its a yes from me, lol.

Ironclad writing!

Gosh, how I adore a fierce protagonist. From what I have read so far, you have made a strong character development which is very suited to the title of the book and can I say just say I love the humor, the side notes and internal thoughts. Please...write on!

Fascinating

I love the strong, female protagonist, the past and presence is a complex writing style and it does need to be refined but you do it very well, write on darling, write on! Very intriguing story-line.

Captivating

Thank you so much that this was no cliche, it was a different and in a way it reminded me of the movie called Prince of Persia, I love it and I am going to go continue reading! :)

Refreshing.

I really appreciate the authenticity of your writing style, it also has a way of engaging a reader. Normally i take note of the plot or charters but i sincerely like the style of writing, refreshing !

Captivating.

Please, write more! whatever you do, eat sleep and write because you have a distinctive gift, even from the start I was rapt with this dystopia ambiance and I love this concept of this alpha generation!

Fascinating!

Tantalizing.

Well I was rapt from the beginning, Definitely find it gripping and if you excuse me, I am going to go read some more of it.