M.C Capocci

Miami, Florida

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Very dinamic!

Your narrative is very descriptive, and you started the story with a lot of action that got me in a state of fear and suspense .

The novel has a solid plot, and you are very creative! I would have loved to read more about Annie's feelings and thoughts.

Pay attention to commas and maintain the same verb tense so there is nothing that can distract readers from your story.

Overall, I enjoyed what I read so far and I am planning on reading more.

keep the good work, Emmanuel. Thank you for letting me review your novel.

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