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Impactful but not forced
I love the theme and your more direct writing style. It felt impactful but not forced. I've have always been a big fan of colors as a concept and it's wonderful what you've done here Keep up the good work!
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Relatable and very easy to digest
I found it easy to connect to the emotions portrayed in these pieces, wether that be from the style if the writing alone or it being drawn from personal experiences, the effect was the same and welcomed either way. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to more from you.
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