Nick

Potential

Arcanum Legacy is an awesome read. I can see the influences of the movies and books and you blend it perfectly, although I can see the potential if you continue down a more original path. don't worry it's good but you can make it better.

Thoughts

I have read the Story and it was good, some has bad grammar or transitions to another scene that didn't made sense but I thought it was well made. I hope you continue to enhance your story, I'll be waiting for future updates in the story.