Hey, firstly I'd like to applaud you for this plot. It is definitely different and really good. Although it is not something I usually read, but it was good enough to capture my interest for almost the whole of it and left me wanting for more. I can't stress enough the fact that this plot has loads of potential and I would love to see where you take it. Also, I believe your writing style is good and you'd be able to do it justice. I also realize that this must be the first draft ( forgive me if not... I am just assuming since it is only 2 chapters in yet) for you'll have enough to focus on the writing skills and grammatical misplacements, I wouldn't call them mistakes for they were not, but even they were not enough to divulge the interest. The only thing I found for you to take a second look on was the use of italics they got confusing sometimes and the dream/nightmare scene of Akash, but it is really good right now.
Read the story now
Waiting for more.