Nikita

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Breath-taking

This seems to be a really good and addictive book so far. The plot is really good, unique and something that gains the interest very quickly. Your writing style is good too with a touch of simplicity which makes it even more intelligible for readers of all variety.
In all it is really good and I am waiting for further updates, but please consider including the translations too for those certain words you used.

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interesting

Hey, firstly I'd like to applaud you for this plot. It is definitely different and really good. Although it is not something I usually read, but it was good enough to capture my interest for almost the whole of it and left me wanting for more. I can't stress enough the fact that this plot has loads of potential and I would love to see where you take it. Also, I believe your writing style is good and you'd be able to do it justice. I also realize that this must be the first draft ( forgive me if not... I am just assuming since it is only 2 chapters in yet) for you'll have enough to focus on the writing skills and grammatical misplacements, I wouldn't call them mistakes for they were not, but even they were not enough to divulge the interest. The only thing I found for you to take a second look on was the use of italics they got confusing sometimes and the dream/nightmare scene of Akash, but it is really good right now.
Waiting for more.

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Different and captivating.

This is a really good and different plot. Thsi may not be something I usually read but is very captivating and interesting. I like the direction where this story is going, however descriptions at certain points about scenarios, situations as well as people would help and make the story even more captivating, the grammar is something that could be corrected. A Bit of backstory about the life of the main character would also help to get a bit more attached to the story...but all in all this story has great potential.

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