Nutella_lover300

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Alpha's Boy

You have skills. Like really good skills, you just need to harness it. Overall the story was really good. Please do not under any surcamstans let Archie lose his spunk. Also I really like the plot and the bond he has with his sister is one of the best, better than me and my brother at that age for sure. Not many comments here just that your flaws are the same as all of us, grammer and spelling. Fucking grammer and spelling. Everyone hates that duo!

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