Onaiza

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Scary as hell

The beginning was very decent and laid down a sold base for what was coming next. And the story got better and better and yes scarier too. I also liked the end. It wasn't soothing or pleasing, it was even more scary. So overall for a horror story, Forgotten Promise really stands out and hooks the reader. I liked your writing style too. It felt natural. Real.

Another thing that I would like to mention here is that apart from the normal scare routine, this story had a deeper meaning. One's own past relationships, promises and dead loved ones have the capability of haunting a person forever. And that is what makes this story special.

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A moment full of love

First of all, I'd admit that I'm a huge fan of the Vampire Diaries and this story is basically a beautiful moment from the series. A moment seen with new eyes.
I feel that the magic of words and thoughts makes these romantic moments more meaningful and more memorable. I don't exactly remember watching anything like this before; but I may not easily forget what I read here.

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Adventurous, scary and dramatic

A great story budding from a great idea. The use of senses is great in the narration. Its fast paced and well presented. The characters are believable. And the best part is that it has a lot of food for thought.

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A quick and interesting read

Sometimes funny is not just funny, it's seriously funny. I believe that it's really difficult to make someone laugh.

Well, this is a piece of hilarious horror. I appreciate the imagination that goes behind this work. And I definitely look forward to reading more of this stuff.

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