Paul Glanville

Los Angeles, CA

I'm an Embedded Systems Engineer by day.

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A good start

Only 7 chapters and we're not even halfway done in this apparent work in progress.

Global overpopulation and men 'solve' the problem by stripping women of their Rights (and more) is not an uncommon theme -- I've privately dabbled in that genre myself. The idea that you can put them in stocks and left out for the refuse company to pick up and dispose of is an interesting touch, I've got to admit.

Points for readability, no obvious spelling errors, and decent grammar; most of these are atrocious on at least two of three counts.

Due to this tale being incomplete, the ratings are tentative.

I'd be interested to read where this one goes from here and how it ends.

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