Pavivoh Latie

Cebu City

Hi, there! Come in my world and have a seat. As soon as you stepped in here, you had already earned the privilege to have a glimpse of my mind through my poems and novel/s.

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Great read, but needs improvement

You had a great writing style and your usage of grammar and mechanics was well-developed as the story progressed. However, I felt like some parts of the story were quite jarring due to the substandard usage of punctuations, especially before a coordinating conjunction. The tone of the story could also be improved and you could have added some originality in it, maybe creating your own magic system, rules, etc., since a lot of stories about werewolves nowadays are quite the same—repeating the same tropes over and over again. The diction and vocabulary usage was so-so. There's a little usage of literary devices, which was actually okay, but it would have been better if you had used them well.

But for readers who are fond of reading werewolves and such without thinking too much about the technicality, it would be a great read.

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GREAT STORY WRITING

The writing of the story itself is great and worth commending! It took me some time to finish the whole updated chapters because of my busy schedule, but I somehow managed to do it. Anyway, if there's a story that I would like to recommend to my werewolf-fanatic friends, this would be it! I hope the author keeps on producing stories like this!

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