Great read, but needs improvement
You had a great writing style and your usage of grammar and mechanics was well-developed as the story progressed. However, I felt like some parts of the story were quite jarring due to the substandard usage of punctuations, especially before a coordinating conjunction. The tone of the story could also be improved and you could have added some originality in it, maybe creating your own magic system, rules, etc., since a lot of stories about werewolves nowadays are quite the same—repeating the same tropes over and over again. The diction and vocabulary usage was so-so. There's a little usage of literary devices, which was actually okay, but it would have been better if you had used them well.
Read the story now
But for readers who are fond of reading werewolves and such without thinking too much about the technicality, it would be a great read.