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Beyond

It was a probable exercise that made it through the pile but the twists and turns made me want to read the story and it made me just glimpse a world out of their double vision and ask questions about the quest of life very good to read a fantasy and all I can see is the mirror. The cover image is very apt too.

Behind the Mask

I must say if you like a mystery with a lot of action then this is the story. The main characters are all good some even too good. I make it a winner and then I may be wrong. I am not going to rob you of making the decision. This is a reader's book, not a writer's book. You just fasten your seat belts and lift off.

Wandering House

It appears as if this story is not yet written. It is a synopsis of a story but it is such a good idea that it has given me leave to criticise the story. The atmosphere could not be more intense and the growing relationship or nonentity of the souls are very nicely placed. Please write the story.

Fiction Or Fantasy

I just thought it was all very nice and sensual but too involved as this is erotica then of course it would be too involved. But the plot line much to be pitied got lost. The two main characters were thinking about each other and left it too late to assume their posts. I did not think about them or want to know anything further and then realized the post must go to someone who is able to consume this type of literature. I am sorry to hurt anyone's feelings as if they are bothered as they are half way to their bed and unable to sleep.

Fire and Air

This is a very interesting take on witches and seems to be working because it is nearing that time of Halloween. These are witches who pack lunches and do things. Like everyday stuff. But are obsessed with their herbs. Not the types you meet on the hoodlum trial? We love witches and they love each other but each to their own I will take a broomstick and we can fly into the magic of this story. Well done.

Savanah Smile

I did not feel that the story had enough depth. It was as if the story was told by a false friend and it was masking something unpleasant. Maybe it was the style of writing. The chapter was so long and there was an element of wit and cadence that I liked but overall it is not for me. It is like a muck up and done with some deft hand but the thing is it could have made me feel more than it did. I thought the characters were a bit wooded and there appeared to be something I had missed. The ambition of the writer must be respected.

21 Days

It is an idea but it is a good idea and somehow almost like a cinema idea. It made me sense the author's writing is brand new and does need development. As the characters are immature and they do have not much but cheerio on their brain. When they are speaking the main character is comparing licorice. I feel this is a writer who is going to write a good deal of worthy work and then take it into a film.

Gothic Parables.

Stories that are Gothic in tone and are nasty reading material make me feel good. Just a note somehow they are not reality and must be injected with something. But the style aside the basic structure of the stories is nasty and pure Edgar Allan Poe the social content, They live in one's head as if they are slipping like a slippery.

Cherry Locked

I write with the inexperience that comes from not knowing erotica and the stuffy nonsense of a virgin earning by the oldest profession. I am not an expert but the thing is most men would grapple with her. The good news she is funny and unique. She has a sore foot from traveling or it is her Epsom salts but she is human. Has a wonderful apartment and has the ideal image of behaving in a world where men do not attack a lone woman in a hotel paid for by them. So it is fantasy. So what?

Maybe She Was Lucky

I am thinking about domestic violence, and it is always never right but what is wrong is that the seeming and the not believing are the same. We ignore it at our peril. We abuse the victim at our leisure, and we leer at others who appear to speak about it. I say this is unnerving.