To begin with, I liked the writing style very much, it's clear and portrays the events very methodically. The tension building was amazing and to know that the main protagonist had a normal, easy going life before she was thrust into an unknown world added that extra element into her struggle. My feelings changed for the characters as I proceeded through the chapters and that's the magic of character driven stories, you get to see how the main protagonist ended up in this distant land after all. As I said, for me the pace was exactly how I prefer to read, nor very slow neither too fast. All in all, it's very intriguing and delightful read.
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I will surely keep reading more of it. Keep up the good work!