PoojaPathak

I write young adult and contemporary romance.

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Amazing start!

The beginning is just so interesting and right away hooked me to the story. I want to know more about these people, the main character, the surrounding and ofcourse this new government that's about to invade. I like cult stories and the horror associated with their ways so it's definitely going to keep me engaged once you add more chapters. For now I can feel how this girl wants to leave this world which she calls as the hell on Earth and I just hope she comes out more as a warrior protagonist than the meek girl. I love it so far!!

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Interesting Read!

Wow, this is one of those stories which are only one of its kind. I'm pretty sure I've never read anything quite like it.. It's very intriguing with the right amount of unexpected twists and turns. From the very beginning I was hooked to the story and needed to know what was about to happen next. The author has done incredible job in keeping the reader at the edge of their imagination and it had a few heart warming moments too. The concept of mystical house and how it has a heart and it talks, what can I say I loved the thrilling aspect of the book a lot. The writing style of the author is as beautiful as the story itself.
Keep up the great work! Waiting for the next updates.

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Interesting Plot!

To begin with the storyline is fresh and refreshing at the same time. I liked how the story started from a past event and then proceeded to the present. I loved the characters and the dynamics between the two main characters. I enjoyed the story so far and looking forward to know what happens next, will it be a happily ever after of the dreamy kind or destiny has other plans. Looking forward to the next updates!!

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Intrigued!!

I'm intrigued with the story and want to know where it goes from here. As, it's still too early to get into the plot details and the other technicalities, I would say a small round of editing will do wonders to the story. Overall, I'm already loving the main character and want to know what happens next. Waiting for the next updates!!

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Loving it!

To start with the plot, I was totally hooked to the story from the very beginning. The characters are fleshed out really well and I could connect with them which is what makes a story gripping. I loved the emotional aspect of the story too and loved the way author has given so much stress on humanizing the feelings of the characters. Also, the writing is beautiful and easy to connect. Waiting eagerly for the next updates!!

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Fascinating Read!

To begin with, I loved how the book is fast paced given that it is action themed, the pacing is apt. It got me hooked from the very beginning. The characters are so beautifully portrayed and they give so much life to the story. I love supernatural stories and that's the main reason I found this one so interesting to read. Also, the writing style of the author is so amazing and refreshing. Although the plot seemed very similar to most of these fantasy books, author has added her own unique touch to it. All in all, it's a great read. Keep up the good work!

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Mind Blowing Read!

What a mind blowing read it was. I could definitely relate with the characters because they are the kind I love to portray in my stories and it was one of the main reasons it kept me hooked. Then comes the thriller part and should I say I knew it will not disappoint me and it didn't. Every event had me biting my nails and I couldn't stop turning the pages. Everything about this book is pure work of art and the fact that author's writing style is so so beautiful that it gave this story a life . I took my time with this one and it was so worth it. It was an absolute delight to read this one and now I love this book so much. Keep up the good work!

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Light hearted and fun read!

I truly enjoyed this story with all the laughs and wits. It sure is so well written and well developed story with a clear plot. The writing style of the author is so so beautiful and those dialogues, they sure did the trick to keep me engaged. I hope to read more of it and can't even express how perfect the characters are. The idea is new as well as refreshing to read but what shines more is the way author has articulated it into a razor sharp, engaging and fast-paced story. I loved it.

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Interesting Read

I really liked the darkness in the story and I was biting my nails the whole time I read it. The plot is definitely fresh and thought inducing. It's creepy as it should be since it gives a dark academia vibe. I wanted someone to step in and save those poor souls from getting murdered by the evil lady. There are a few editing glitches here and there which can be easily fixed with a proper re-editing but otherwise I like the writing style and how gripping the tale was made by the author.
Keep up the great work.

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Unique Concept

To start with, I really commend the author for this unique plot. I have never read anything similar to this and it's the first thing which hooked me to it. I like the main character Toby a lot and ofcourse his chemistry with Rebecca is just so cute and endearing to read. Then comes the idea of gaining superpowers and exhibiting those powers. I must say that as far I have read the story till now, I can already feel the build up to a much bigger plot twist. I am definitely going to read it further because it is addictive. I love the writing style of the author since it's easy but alluring at the same time. Top all this with the character development and believe me it's a must read.
Keep up the good work!

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Bounded Strings

To begin with, I really enjoyed the dynamics between all the characters. They gave life to the plot and in the best way possible. The story has both emotional and mystical aspect to it which made my reading experience even more delightful. I enjoyed how each chapter has something to offer and you can't stop turning the pages until you connect dots of the buildup. The writing style is so immensely enjoyable and unique at the same time. It's an interesting read for sure. I loved the way author has portrayed the friendship and chemistry between these characters. The introduction of a mysterious connection and possible complexities around that connection was the main hook for me.
Keep creating beautiful stories!
Waiting for next updates!

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Distant Lands

To begin with, I liked the writing style very much, it's clear and portrays the events very methodically. The tension building was amazing and to know that the main protagonist had a normal, easy going life before she was thrust into an unknown world added that extra element into her struggle. My feelings changed for the characters as I proceeded through the chapters and that's the magic of character driven stories, you get to see how the main protagonist ended up in this distant land after all. As I said, for me the pace was exactly how I prefer to read, nor very slow neither too fast. All in all, it's very intriguing and delightful read.
I will surely keep reading more of it. Keep up the good work!

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Super Interesting!

Wow, what an interesting plot the author has weaved out of Hex. From the very beginning this one word had me hooked to it. All the characters are so well defined and has so much to contribute to the story. Not just the mystery but how that affects the lives of these five boys had me turning pages until I was craving for more.
The language is crisp and refreshing to read, I ended up loving the pace of the story and how author has added the necessary details to make the surrounding and emotions clear.
I'm totally in love with this story and can't wait for the next updates.
Keep up the good work!

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Amazing start!

Wow, what a fantastic and intriguing start this story has. I was hooked right through the very beginning and the author has done an amazing work in setting up the correct thrilling mode of the story. I'm all game for a psychopath who has a pattern for his crime and the details of the same did it for me. I need to read further. The writing is fresh and definitely worth appreciating.
Keep up the good work! Waiting for the next updates!

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Amazing!

To start with, your writing style is so beautiful that I have to appreciate it as the first thing. The story really got me hooked from the very beginning. I have a thing for the shapeshifters so it instantly drew my attention. Charles character wasn't very likable to me when he started but now that's the beauty of character development and with each new chapter I'm getting closer to falling for these perfectly imperfect characters. The suspense is amazing and I can't wait for the next updates.
Great work! Update soon!

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Darkness at its best!

I love reading dark stories and this book was exactly what I needed from a horror read. The characters were so deliciously dark and twisted with the right amount of psychological shock value. I was absolutely intrigued from the very first chapter and couldn't stop reading.
I was so immensely invested in this story that I didn't mind the few edits that would make it a smooth read for everyone. But as I said it wasn't that noticeable and I didn't find them marring the plot of the story. All in all, I am still thinking about the characters so that means it does have a lasting impact on the readers.
Keep up the good work. Waiting for next updates!

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The Mansion

I really enjoyed this story. Amazing work!

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An amazing mix of fantasy and romance.

From the very beginning the characters pulls you into their world. I loved how each character has a depth and they live up to the roles they are given. The world building is so well done that I can almost create the visuals in my head. As for the writing style, the language is vivid and crisp and so very enjoyable to read. I was totally hooked to the story from the very beginning and my interest did not waver. I'm looking forward to the next updates. Keep up the good work. I really love your creative command over the words!!

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I absolutely love this book!

When I started reading I had no idea I will be pulled into a world of humans and giants but still feel connected to the emotions of the characters. I want to know more about the world they are surrounded with but to be honest I love reading about the emotional and mental state of the characters living in a world instead of the world itself in general. That being said, I surely enjoyed this story so far and waiting for next updates!!

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