Prachi

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Good Start, Strong Story Line

The main character Kiara comes out as a strong woman. In my opinion, her thoughts can be a little more formed. Grammar can definitely be improved. ( Sentences like place her in shower, can be revisited).
Over all I liked the way the story is forming and look forward to reading the rest of it.

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Unique Story

The story took me to a world I never ever imagined in to the world of Devas. The attention to details like time, place and era is done perfectly. Writer has formed each character with lot of layers and each has a place in the story. There is nothing which feels irrelevant here.
Great story waiting for the next book.

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A beautiful story

I was blown away by the first sentence of the first chapter. That hooked me to the story.
"I call myself half orphan" .Story is beautifully formed. The throwbacks in to the past are timed right. The dreams of a young girl, the restrictions and the boundaries in the name of tradition is something we all have faced at some level, that is what resonated with me the most.
I really liked reading this book.Looking forward to many more.

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