A story with potential.
I gave this story an overall of 3 stars, not because I was dissatisfied with what I was reading, but on the contrary because of the fact that it has so much potential and room for development.
I read the first paragraph and found myself wanting to know more. Who is the I? How is this distorted reality with the demons? What will happen when the guards fall asleep? I wanted more! I craved for more!
So I'd really love to see this story expanded even more. I enjoyed its darkness and I'd love to read even more of it.
I really liked the poem. It created this picture of a baroque style cafe that you kind of enter it to feel relaxed and yet you feel trapped due to outside circumstances.
I especially loved the writing style, If one looks at it, it does look like a birdcage which is an excellent image to fit the poem. I also think people should read it because it provides you with a sense of overall tranquility as if you have left the city to take a break from the chaos of life.
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