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Great setup
I think the story is quite interesting. As I was reading this, I thought this was going to be another typical heist story but it is a bit more complex. I really liked the chess angle. I also felt like the main character was a lot like catwoman. The cliff hanger was great. I felt like the chess board was intentionally laid out for her so the male voice could be someone who knows her. Very interested to see where the story goes from here.
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