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My kit kat

I think with some editing it has some good potential as a sexy romance!

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Me if I were in Harry Potter

I loved the idea and plot to this story and throwing yourself into the Harry Potter world. I would go through and check grammar mistakes and do shorter paragraphs so it flows easier. Overall I think you have great potential if you keep working on it and editing it.

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I'm just doing edits and it brought me here and wouldn't let me exit!

Ignore this review!!

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The Em

I love the idea and the storyline behind it but it was really hard to keep up with when it's all in the same paragraph. I would make shorter paragraphs especially between dialogue so it's easier to keep up with the storyline. I can't wait for updates to see what you do with it :)

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Not a typical teen story

I’m just here proofreading my own book but let me know what you think in the comments!

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