As a cat lover, the premise sounds really interesting, even though I'm not really a fan of modern stories. :-)
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The pacing is good and I enjoy reading from Quorra's POV.
I noticed, however, one flaw with this story. Quorra, who is suffering from mysophobia, working at a cat sanctuary sounds like an unlikely scenario. The office she works in is described as messy. She wouldn't consider it as a peaceful environment and would have spent many hours making it orderly, just so she could control the number of possible germs in that space. Also, it would have been better to show more scenes with her washing her hands, wearing gloves etc. instead of telling outright in the very first chapter she has germophobia.
I also recommend trying to use the free version of Grammarly, I really love it since it helps get rid of unnoticed typos (e.g. the "too" vs. "to" in the first paragraph of Chapter 1).