Sahar

Extremely good

The story is effing blast. The use of unique word at the beginning was everything I needed to read the whole story which was REALLY good. I am a new writer so I do not have much idea about the ways and rules in writing but after reading this you have become my ideal. Just loved the story everything was on point no words to describe!!

A fresh start !!

I really like the story and the smooth writing makes it even better. I really like the author's way of writing although I'm not an experienced writer but the scenes are like really descriptive and allows you to freely imagine it. A good going, best of luck !!

Lovely

Really good. It would be so funny if the gods and goddesses talked like this but I am really enjoying this. Best of luck dear.

Overwhelming

Like it's literally perfect. Really good description. Glad I came across this.

Impressive

So to be honest the story is good. It has the thrill to make you want to read it more. You style is impressive. Although I don't know much about action and fantasy writing, I still liked the story. It just needs a little spice. First the synopsis and the cover. It's basically the first impression. I just dont feel like its from an author's pov. Like the first paragraph of the first chapter has this line 'this man had' which didn't really sit well with me as it could have been a bit better like 'he had' . Your Grammar is really good, so much better than mine. English not being my first language troubles me a lot. But it also makes me appreciate other writers who have really good Grammer. Overall love the story, keep on going. After all it's your first draft. ❤️❤️❤️

Nailed it

Love the way you write poems. It's not really my thing but this was truly marvelous. It felt amazing and I loved the feels.

Gold

Love the book. Love the way you write. Don't worry about the punctuation and grammar, after all it's just the first draft. You can always edit them later on. I'll be waiting for the next update.

No words

I'm not a fan of this genre but this is definitely something that pulls me in. The story is really descriptive and everything is on point. I look forward to reading it.

Sounds promising

The storyline is really good and it feels so real. You feel like you're living in the story. Everything is on point. Really glad that I came across this one. Keep writing. Best wishes !!!

Nice plot

The storyline and the plot is really good. This happens to lot of people, you have the storyline but you can't put it in words correctly. You just need to try and make things descriptive, just try to stretch the sentences using adjectives etc.. Trust me the story is really good but just make sure it becomes more like these 2 chapters should have been completed in at least 4 chapters with all the descriptions. I'm sorry if you don't like it. But I know what it feels like. I get that a lot too. But you just need to make sure you keep on going after all it'syour fisrt story. Best wishes, keep writing and Goodluck!!!❤❤

Stellar

I am in love. I don't really like reading horror but reading this was such a good experience, such a unique storyline. I'm glad I came across this book. The writing style makes me feel like I am in the story, makes me want to read more. Best wishes to the author for her future writings. You are truly amazing.

Loving it

I am totally in love with this book. It makes you want for more. The author's writing style is mind blowing. Not everybody can write horror so vividly. Keep going and God luck.

2 words mind-blowing

The author's creativity is on another level. Love the story. Love the style and everything.Keep writing and update soon. No pressure but I'll be waiting. Good luck !!!

This is lovely

The storyline is good and the writing style is OK. If you're looking for some new fantasy story, this book is for you. I just feel like it's a bit bland but it's just 2 chapters so that will be OK when the main characters meet. Other than that the author has really worked hard in writing. Best of luck to you !! Keep writing and I'll be waiting for the update.

Pure love is in the air

This is what I feel when I read the story. Every character has a bit of mystery and her mom is like so supportive and everything is really relatable. Love how this is going. Best of luck and continue writing. No pressure of updating but I'll be waiting.

Great, absolutely stellar

The start is really good which seems like the start of a great love story. I really look forward to reading more. The main characters just need a bit description like where Claire comes from and who's James, his company and all. Great going !!

Absolutely stellar

I've only read the first three chapters and I can only say one thing .....Wow. The plot is so good and the description is so vivid. The author have put so much effort into each and every sentence that it makes you feel like you're a character in the story. I'm so glad I found this.