sappho !!

warning: contains spoilers

just to start, i would like to say that this story does NOT belong under humor. yes, there are some funny parts, but the fact that there were 2 deaths and 1 major injury by the time you make it halfway through the book...that really puts a damper on your comedy. second, the grammar and spelling are not exactly the best. you might want to have someone come through and proofread for you. (i wouldn't mind doing it if you asked.) lastly, i would like to say that even though i had some issues with it, the story was incredibly written and with a little bit of fine tuning, it could be near perfect.

trouble in paradise?

not bad. there were many inconsistencies and plot holes but i didn't really mind too much. i felt that most of the characters were way too stereotypical, with the exception of steph. the only thing i really had a problem with was how inconsistent ethan's character was. i noticed that most of the story felt like filler information that i didn't really need to know. overall, not a bad read, just not a great one.

mak zukerborg

this is fucking SENDING MEEEEEEEEE i can't breathe i'm laughing so hard

haha i'm the author

please don't put spam in the reviews thanks

shit! i'm sorry!

the story was actually not bad. the characters felt real and relatable. the plot had some holes here and there, and there were a handful of grammar issues. my only issue was that after they got together, the rest seemed kinda pointless. it was almost as if the story had been rushed and then the author felt like it wasn't long enough so they just added a bunch of filler at the end. in the end, it was an easy read that made me laugh. *Edit: even though it wasn't the best, it was still pretty addicting.

I'm Impressed

Holy wow. That was an amazing story. It was beautifully written, had very few grammar and spelling issues, and the details were so amazing I would get shivers reading this. I hope for you that your writing gets published as proper books someday and more than just stories on a fanfiction website. You are a truly talented writer.