Kola

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Most of my books uploaded here were written as child. They are unedited scrapes of random ideas. Collection of poems is edited and free to read. Hope you like my work.

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I loved this book so much...

The plot is intense and interesting. Also, the vocabulary is rich and I don't find much grammar issues. I'm not a professional. The writing style is new and unique. Also, P.O.V's help so much to understand the story. I want to read more and find will Roland be a faithful person or will he betray Count? Will Count be able to get the love of Julia? Update soon.

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TGBA summer, 2022 Judge report.

Title and prologue is enough to catch a reader's interest, since it is very well written with a unique theme. After chapter 1, the story takes the form of a journal rather than a story. Written in first person, it portrays the feelings of our main lead. The grammatic error like incorrect use of pronouns and paragraph spacing makes it look like a first draft. Though it improves with passing chapters. Taking help from beta readers and using Grammarly can be beneficial.

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Sensational and deep poetry.

I really loved the poems and the theme. I adore your book cover, though a bit of a few changes in it will make it more intriguing. The poetry was good minus the punctuation thing, in a poetry punctuation matters . Other wise there was actual meaning behind the poems and a sequence with wonderful rhythm. Do a Grammarly check before uploading poems.

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LOVE IT!!!

The introduction, blurb and book cover definitely pushed me to read more. The plot flows smoothly with here and there a little comedy, tragedy, and romance. My favorite characters are Apollo and Achillenon. They are the best uncles in little Chimera could find after her loss of her twin sister and mother. The characters , writing style are truly unique here on inkitt. Just a little typing errors here and there. Otherwise the story is a prefect...
Not many people write Greek mythology. It's truly hard work so make sure to read this book and give feedback.

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Amazing work

The story is well set and the characters seem so real. I like the vividness and track of the story. Theme is itself unique and interesting. I would love to read more.

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Love it...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ

Honestly, One thing I like the most is the vivid imagery. I love the way you describe the sces. It almost make it real. This is the thing most writers lake. Another thing, I love the suspense. The book has tendency to be one of the bests.
Do update soon. i would love to read on.

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Great poem!!

The theme of your poem is great. Having a unique and strong theme is the half accomplishment. You did great in that part. After that comes your writing style. Your's is unique. You just need to pay more attention in stanza balancing and correction in some typing mistakes. Otherwise the poem throughout is deep, sentimental and lovely. I do love the poem. I am quite surprised that it's your first attempt.. Most people don't have that. You do have a natural gift of poetry. Do polish it and cherish it. Do waste it.

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Love it....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š

The story is unique, easy going yet realistic. I would say the plot is just perfect. I really love Olivia. She is strong, and brave. She faces the life challenges better than any of us. I really do love the ending. I couldn't help crying. I recommend to all. Don't think just read and enjoy what the readers cherished. U won't regert it, I promise....

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Splendid work.....

Plot, being the main thing, you hit that part right. The story itself is interesting, unique and vivid. It feel so alive.... It's a great work, ignoring some punctuation mistakes. It sure did got me hooked up ..... ๐Ÿ˜ŠI can't wait to read more and find out what is Zaira going to do? I really wish she comes clean, as ti is really the right thing to do. Do update soon....
Thumbs up for your book...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Best story ever......

The plot is quite interesting and easy going. Your style reminds me of Lady Susan by Jane Austen . One of my favourite classic writers.. The unique romance idea adds just the beauty of the book. I so love it....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Love it....

I love the plot. Although, I don't like stories with sad endings but this one is definitely an exception. I do live the flow of the story and the chemistry between the main characters. I would live to see where this story goes. The story just reminds me of candy crush....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I got all hooked up and I can't wait for the next update. On first seeing the book cover, I thought it was something cliche. Then i read, and I would say it not something cliche to me but something close to reality. Honestly, I am a bit embarrased by the fact I judged the book by its cover. Well, the book is sure going to be one of my few favourites. Good job, by the way!
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๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

The book is a great symbol of hope for those who suffer in this world. It keeps you going and sentimental. I recommend this book to all who seek something to cry on. I couldn't help loving it due to its realistic and sentimental facts..... Overall, Its a lovely collection of poems..

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Soothing!

There is few poetry that leaves you calm and touched Your's is one of them. I like the way your poems goes and I do hope for more of your poems. I love to read them.

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Catchy!

From the beginning, it did grabbed my attention. Ignoring some grammatical mistakes, the story is great. The part of the case Blackwood is working on, needs to be a bit clear. Although, the formation of characters and theirs respective personalities is one thing your good at. Great collection of erotica and romance! I loved it

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Cuteness that never ends....

I loved this book from top to bottom. Though there are some itsy bitsy typing mistakes. Other than that the plot and story has a flow that some people lack. I would just say that I loved your innocent romance.

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Nice book

This book has a lot of potential and I would love to read more of it.
Though not a fan of science fic, I found it very interesting with a unique theme. It would be good if you introduced the characters first as pacing to know the character is a bit slow (with the hint of mystery)
Overall, A good book to read.

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Amazing book ever!

The book was itself good and i loved the theme of Greek mythology. Honestly I was shocked to see the readers engagement as not many people read that. There is a strong message in the story while there is third point of view. Also the book is very well edited, which makes it boost the readability.
Overall, a very nice read and totally worth the time.

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Nice Plot

The author have a nice book cover, theme, blurb and lot here. I loved the story with a mix of mystery and thriller. It would be much helpful if you run a grammar scan before posting even if it's a draft. It would improve your readers engagement. As, a draft it was a nice work.

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Nice book

Everything about this book seemed perfect to me. It would do good if you provide a diction in the beginning of the terms and all. For non-mythical readers it can help a lot.
It was a nice read and I really enjoyed it.
Do give this book a chance and you won't regret it.

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Sensational poetry...

It was a very nice piece of work in English, and other languages. Lovely cover and theme with a whole lot of good poetry inside.
There were just some punctuational mistakes, other wise the poetry flowed like a river...
It has a lot of potential and do keep writing.

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Loved this story...

A tale of romance between death and a mortal. ..
The plot was unique and interesting. Characters, blurb, style and theme everything was excellent.
A little work needs to be done on sentence formation. Like in chapter 2, there are are many compound sentences, that make it hard to follow. Even if they must be kept use punctuation to help with the flow.
Also, there was a sudden jump from normal world to the fantasy. I t would be nice if death would have told her a little about his world or his friends like Gog.
Other than that I loved the book and I can't wait for more...
Thank Your author for such an amazing read.

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Strong characters...

From what I last read the book, this book was completely unedited and I can see the writer has put in great effort. This book got my attention from the start and I really loved the strong characters. Nicely done. ..

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Nice plot

This book has a lot of potential and a nice plot, blurb and cover. I was touched from the message delivery and the theme of the book.
The problem is with the typing errors. Instead of saying 'I got shy and pulled my head down' , 'try the color rose to my cheek and i couldn't meet his eyes.' Try to express the feeling rather the action. This could help with strong reader interaction.
Anyways it was a nice read and experience.

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Nice classic fanfic.

Great potential in the story.
Very nice plot and a twist in the the classic tale. The character sketching was so intriguing and quite strong. Overall, a nice read. Can't wait to read an extension of the book. I would love to read a return of Captain Pan and James.
Do give it a try and you won't regret it.

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When love wilts away...

Theme of the story is a relatable and quite interesting. I loved the plot and the cover especially. It has smooth flow of story line, mysteries, romance, drama, nice paragraph spacing, strong characters and strong grammar with very little typing errors. Overall, a nice read and can't wait to read more...
Do give this book a chance and I promise you won't regret it..

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Great so far

I enjoyed reading this book. The first two chapters were enough to get my interest. Also, I appreciate author's efforts to clear up things in chapter three. It would have been nice if there were more chapters Some typing errors other than that it was really nice to read a book like this; interesting with features of both mystery, romance, drama, fantasy and supernatural beings. Can't wait to read more..
Do give this book a chance and you won't be disappointed.

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Nice story about evacuation in World War

It was a nice read and I got hooked to this book just reading the second chapter.
Amazing story with uniqueness, smooth flow of plot, lovely characters, enchanting cover and blurb, historical romance, adventure and drama. I haven't seen anything like it ever on inkitt.
A few typing errors here and there, otherwise you have good grasp over grammar.
Overall, it was a pleasure to read this.
Something new to read and light hearted..

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Amazing story!!!

The blurb was good, it got my interest. The plot was so good with mysteries, lies, hot romances, thrilling turning points and the best ending everrr... Now to think of the grammar and writing style, there are little typing errors, can be overlooked by primary readers or most of them. 'Cause the story is sooo interesting. Other thing, the writing style was defiantly engaging with heroic characters. Characters the essence of writing and creation of writers. If some says, that the characters weren't relatable, I don't think you should take it to heart. As most characters are writer's creation so own them.

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Nice book!

This is a lovely book with a lot of potential. Kylie is a strong woman. Jackson and Alex have such a good bond. The story is truly engaging with strong characters. Can't wait for more updates....

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Nice Plot!

I read the whole book even if I wasn't supposed to, it was just worth the time and energy.

The book has a nice plot, cover, and blurb. The problem might be in typing error ( like missing article somewhere, for that run a Grammarly grammar check), relatability of chapters. ( this harms the flow of the story, feels like reading headlines of the story) .
Other than that the story was soo good I couldn't put it back down., till I finished THE WHOLE BOOK.
Please update soon. I will love to read more.

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A great story idea!

It's a very nice book. The whole book is a rollercoaster ride full of lots of fun and adventures yet a steaming hot romance. When first looked at the cover I was expecting something clichรฉ or erotic yet it was a blend of mystery, romance, drama,, thriller and adventure. in a nice way. Sometimes the connection of the reader drops. This very thing happened to me. As the male protagonist needs to be shown a little more crazy to add up the spice. Other than that very few typing errors and grammar mistakes. Real nice novel and must give it a thumbs up.

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True hidden gem!

The thing that caught my interest was the title and the synopsis. Classy, cute yet unexpected romances bundled with certain cliff hangers that add a bit of spice
Reading this high school, love triangle book reminds so me so much of high school. I got totally hooked to this book. Can't put it down. Alas, I will have to wait for the author to upload more chapters. I would defiantly love to see this book published one day.
Some room for improvement in the paragraph formation and spacing. Otherwise, a real good book and I would definitely recommend it especially to young adult romance/ drama readers.

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An amazing book.

I really loved this books. It was just PERFECT. A confused cowboy searching for what matters....An unexpected encounter with a dying man....and a promise he made.

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Scoopy Story!

A nice book with lots of thrill and action. I love the author writing style through a bit of grammatical errors make that disturbs the flow of the story. The major attractive thing about the story was the plot. Although it was not my usual choice of book but I was asked to read it and I thought why not give it a shot. And I defiantly not regret it and so will no other reader.. On the whole it was a nice experience to read this book.

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Amazing poem...

The fluency of the poem is so smooth and natural. It is not forced rather it is written with a heart full of emotions. Even if the fluency and feelings are real and natural, it lack in the point of punctuations here and there. This aspect is the one you need to work on. I do hope everyone will like this poem.
After reading this poem I feel myself so full of sentiments . I just want to and give papa a bear hug. I want to read more poetry like this. I just give it a thumbs up.

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Friendzone

The storyline is no doubt amazing and interesting. The characters are seems alive and quite realistic. Although there needs some work to be done in P.O.Vs. I mean it seem more like a rough script rather than a detailed novel. A little more effort and your writing can be more interesting. It has a lot of potential though.
Personally, I like Alison's character better than Charlie's. She is stubborn and a fighter. SO is Charlie but I just prefer Alison better. The essence of vividness is more in Alison than Charlie.
Up till now, the story is smooth and interesting to read. I can't get it off my mind and I'm definitely hooked. Update soon . I will love to read more and get to know more.

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Love it...

I like the book. It is easy and quick to read along with interesting. Except for some typing errors the book seems a promising one. It has a lot of potential. Keep your good work! I can't wait to read more. Do update soon.

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I love Blair so much...

Enjoyed and loved the book so much!
Loved the book because of it realistic theme and story-line. I liked the ending so much! It is a great read and you will not regret it, ever.
The writer has a lot of potential to be a successful writer.

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I love it...

The plot is interesting and lovely. One of the things is that it's unique and bonds the reader's attention. The love the flow and the way it ends.

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Love it!!

I like the plot and story. It is intense and quite good in pacing. One doesn't get bored so easily. Apart from some typing mistakes, it's a great book. I would love to read more. please do update soon.

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I totally love it!!!! The plot is so awesome. I love Dee!! She is so sarcastic. The whole novel is like rollercoaster ride. It totally got me hooked. ..hehe. I love the chemistry between Madison and Chris. I love the ending. IT IS A PERFECT BOOK!!!!!

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Splendid!!!!

The plot is epic and really interesting. A little more descriptive in action in needed. Otherwise, the book is wholly a great work. I love Damien and his mysterious personality. The romance blooming is so touching....
Keep up the good work!!
Do update soon!!

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Love it๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜

Overall, the story is quite great. The plot is unique, interesting and grabs one attention. A lot effort has been put into the story and turning the fables. I did love the book and the suspense is totally worth it. Do keep your good work on!!!!
Thumbs up for your story!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Unique idea...

The plot is the first thing that caught my eye, Its a quite interesting, amazing and intense. I love it and it got me hooked. So far, ignoring some grammatical errors, it is a great read. I would recommend to all .Don't think.Just read it guys!. It's a great read and you won't regret it.. Update soon. I can't wait for the next update....๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Š

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๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜.....

The plot of the story is quite interesting, descriptive, and in detail.. A bit of typing and few grammatical issues are there. Other than that, it is a great work and surely worth waiting for. I can't wait to read where this story goes. Also, I have never felt this scared. It might be the fact that I'm easily scared. I am guessing how will I sleep at night. I will have to jump in mama's bed, I think....lol.

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OMG.....

The plot is quite outstanding. I like the smooth, realistic flow and unique idea. Alongwith the way you explain the wheel of the life. It is a great book. I love it. Certainly, it is going to be in my favourites list.....

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๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜

The story is quite easy to go on. Plot is pretty interesting and I can't wait to read more. A little more of some tragedy would make the story more becoming. Why hadn't I seen it before??? It could be a great story one day. Just some touches here and there would make the story more interesting. Please update soon.

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Sweet....

The story might have some bumps in the first two chapters but I loved it. I was able to read it to the end and enjoyed it. The best character award goes to Sydney......lol. I love her. The book is sooo interesting. I wana read it again....

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Can't wait for more......

The story is lovely, cheesy and got suspense. It has great potentail. Although, the story goes smootghly till now. i suspect some storms. It would be great story after some little editing and typing mistakes. It got me hooked. i would love to read the rest of the story.

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Love it๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐโคโค๐Ÿ’–

The story is overall great and got me hooked. It built the interest of the reader. The character of Cher is quite lovely and complex. Although, the ending got me tearing until i saw the second book.......It is childish and romantic yet never leaving the side of reality.

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I loved the book...

The story is interesting and keeps the interest of reader till the end. The twists and incredible idea of story line got me hooked t this book. I recommend it to all who see this review. If your having second thought, just read it. Don't think and i promise you won't regret. it.

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Heart touching poems.

Whenever i read your poetry i feel like i have dived within. i can't help myself feeling the exact emotions in the poem. Its so deep and emotional. One or two times i literally cried out my heart.

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Great!

Well, there is always two sides of a thing. Its up to you, on which side you look. Great poem and strong sense of capturing scene!

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True!

I like the way you express yourself fully regarding the harsh nature of human. The poem follows a unique sense of rhyming scheme. Apart from some grammatical and punctuation mistakes, it's quite great.

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Catchy....

The poem is great. In quest of being new in line, you managed properly to writ such a beautiful prose about smog. There are some grammar mistakes but thumbs up on your work,bro.....๐Ÿ‘

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Catchy!

Alex and Jonah seem so cute together. It's one of the cut romance type story and one can't help loving it. The plot is quite interesting and hold the suspense till end. Its a great blend of mystery, romance and horror.

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Love it!

The story reflects the true cultural environment of East. I really like your writing style. Some say that it lake some reality. I don't agree to that and I think otherwise. True love is hard to find. Who say, life is a bed of roses? Every relation has its ups and down. If someone asks your forgiveness , we forgive them. A women forgiving her husband's affair isn't a new thing. Sorry, I'm really getting of the point. Your book is great and i'll love to see u a famous writer one day.

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Innocent Love....

Maadhuri, the main character seems a dreamer while on the other hand her well to be ..... seems a bit cold and practical person. Up till now, this is all i can guess. Whatever, the story is good. The way you explain the wedding rituals is quite simple and easy to understand. I mean some some people write them so complex. One could hardly understand. Up till now, the theme is too practical and close to reality. I love realistic stories. And I hope you will update soon. I can't hold myself.......:)

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Sinister

The story is a bit bumpy and interesting. I mean its a lot to take in just a few chapter. then again it is your style of writing. This is like one of the legends. The main role Levy is a bit out of shape. Yes, past do change people. what you have explained about his parents, don't make a person that much bad. Unless he had the blood of someone on his hands. Overall, the plot is great and I do think that the true bad guy in this is Reign.The story is good and one would not be able to hold his hunger for more .:)..

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greatness found within

The poems are lovely and carry deep meanings. This make them interesting and thoughtful at the same time.

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Break the Rules!

I won't say that the plot lacks anything except some spices. I will just say that the central idea may not be new one but you seemed kind of a person who knows to play wit the words and plots to make it interesting..

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