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Great Story!

This is a very cool story. I like the development of Promise throughout the whole thing and to see her transformation. The characters in the story are very unique and I feel it is the strongest part of the story itself. The tension that is created between the classes is a smart idea and it really gives the story some depth. I really like the twist that was put in with the "Duds". I think every decision that you made in the story was very smart and it made for a really enjoyable read. The only room for improvement would be to go through your story again and fix some grammatical issues! Great job and I hope more people read this because it is really good.

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