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Love romance novels and loves to write them. Deadpool is my fav movie.

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Pretty good

You did a pretty good job, but I suggest Grammarly. Keep up the good work!

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Beautifully written <3

I absolutely LOVE your writing style. You did an amazing job, however, the plot line seems a little cliche. But some authors intention is to make their stories cliche. But, if you are not one of those authors, I recommend adding a little spice to the story.

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Pretty good

You did pretty good on the story. However, you need to work on grammar. But otherwise, good job!

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Awesome job!

The plot line is amazing, I love how it is romantic but still void from the cheesiness of most lovey-dovey books. Well done!

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Good job!

You are so good at writing! I would totally buy this book, Keep writing!

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Off to a good start!

There's enough description and the plot pulls you in well. There are some part of the book that will need work, but everything checks out. You are an amazing writer, and I'm in need of some tips. It would be great if you would give me an advice with my novel, it's too descriptive and I don't know which parts I need to take out. Again, amazing job. Keep up the good work!

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Good job!

Soo good!!!!! Keep up the good work

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Good job!

The description is spot on, and the plot is beautifully done. However, grammar is in need of help! I suggest Grammarly

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Potential

You have an amazing plot. However, your description is lacking, your grammar is suffering, and your spelling needs work! I suggest Grammarly. As for the plot, it's exceptional. But, I feel like your going too fast. it almost feels rushed.

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Flow

You need to focus on making the poem flow a bit more. Otherwise, I like where your going

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amazing works!

Beautifully written!

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Amazing job!

Love your works, however, I suggest slowing down a bit, but most like that fast pace type of reading so I wouldn't worry too much about it (;

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Potential!

This story has potential!
Your plot is on point, however; you need more description!!! And I suggest grammarly for your grammar issues. otherwise, good job!

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Pretty good!

I love your writing style, however, after saying the age of the main character you switched writing styles making him seem younger than before. In the beginning, it seemed that the character was 16. But after mentioning his age, he seemed younger. But otherwise, you did a lovely job writing this.

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Pretty good

It's pretty good, almost made me cry in the beginning. Although, it's going a bit too fast! Slow it down, take your time. And more description, please! Description is soo important. What did the aunties house look like? why did the mom leave? Add more to the story and pick a better ending for the first chapter!

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Hooked

You had me hooked from the very start. Only a few grammar issues, but that can be fixed with Grammarly. You have such a talent at writing, keep it up!

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Pretty good

It's pretty good so far, but I'm not quite hooked. this story has so much potential. However, you need to add more description! Show not tell, but otherwise, beautiful work!

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Pretty good

It was pretty good, however, I need more of that description! And slow down on the story, it was kind of rushed. But overall, it was pretty good! I really like your writing style.

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Good job!

This book has the humor and the romance. Which are my two fav things! Keep up the good work, you may want to edit it a bit. But besides that, you did beautifully <3

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Good job!

Your writing style is on point, and the plot line is awesome.

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Grammar!

I love the characters and the main ones spunk. However, grammar is in need of fixing! Along with a bit of editing. And the "Bad boy", Maybe you should make him fall in love with the bad girl slowly instead of right away. And how can they kill her at school? There should be a fight outside of school or she get's kidnapped by them. It would make the story more exciting that way, and less confusing.

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Great job!

The writing is amazing work. It's not too descriptive and there's not overloads of it either. You did an amazing job, keep up the good work.

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Amazing job

I couldn't stop reading it, you did a beautiful job. I love your descriptive writing, and the style of it. You may need to work on punctuation though, but nobody's perfect. Your plot line was clear, but still had me asking the question that needs to be asked: "what happens next?"

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Beautiful job

You did a beautiful job writing these poems. Though may some be confusing, they are all very different and unique. It makes one think about the meaning behind it.

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Descriptive

The description was spot on, but the prologue was confusing. Maybe if you'd describe the setting more, then it would be more understandable. But it was an amazing start overall. You'll have to give me a few pointers on how you do your writing style (;

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