Shewanela_wafers097

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Love romance novels and loves to write them. Deadpool is my fav movie.

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Beautifully written <3

I absolutely LOVE your writing style. You did an amazing job, however, the plot line seems a little cliche. But some authors intention is to make their stories cliche. But, if you are not one of those authors, I recommend adding a little spice to the story.

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Good job!

You are so good at writing! I would totally buy this book, Keep writing!

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Flow

You need to focus on making the poem flow a bit more. Otherwise, I like where your going

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Amazing job!

Love your works, however, I suggest slowing down a bit, but most like that fast pace type of reading so I wouldn't worry too much about it (;

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Potential!

This story has potential!
Your plot is on point, however; you need more description!!! And I suggest grammarly for your grammar issues. otherwise, good job!

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Pretty good

It's pretty good, almost made me cry in the beginning. Although, it's going a bit too fast! Slow it down, take your time. And more description, please! Description is soo important. What did the aunties house look like? why did the mom leave? Add more to the story and pick a better ending for the first chapter!

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Hooked

You had me hooked from the very start. Only a few grammar issues, but that can be fixed with Grammarly. You have such a talent at writing, keep it up!

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Good job!

This book has the humor and the romance. Which are my two fav things! Keep up the good work, you may want to edit it a bit. But besides that, you did beautifully <3

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Good job!

Your writing style is on point, and the plot line is awesome.

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Grammar!

I love the characters and the main ones spunk. However, grammar is in need of fixing! Along with a bit of editing. And the "Bad boy", Maybe you should make him fall in love with the bad girl slowly instead of right away. And how can they kill her at school? There should be a fight outside of school or she get's kidnapped by them. It would make the story more exciting that way, and less confusing.

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Amazing job

I couldn't stop reading it, you did a beautiful job. I love your descriptive writing, and the style of it. You may need to work on punctuation though, but nobody's perfect. Your plot line was clear, but still had me asking the question that needs to be asked: "what happens next?"

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Beautiful job

You did a beautiful job writing these poems. Though may some be confusing, they are all very different and unique. It makes one think about the meaning behind it.

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