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I trap myself
Inside my cage
within you find rage
Inside tears fall
Inside I call
for no one.
No sun
rises within
It's a sin,
I like my cage
I need my cage
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Poetry that scrapes the heart or twist the mind, it bites ones soul or treats you kind. As you read words on pages, you will find examples of life. Based off of the hardships of life, and the bittersweet moments, these poems should tear your heart or soar your spirits.
I trap myself
Inside my cage
within you find rage
Inside tears fall
Inside I call
for no one.
No sun
rises within
It's a sin,
I like my cage
I need my cage
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Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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Caspian Gray: Hello everyone!I'm Caspian Gray, a writer who focuses on deep, character-driven emotional dramas. I'm currently looking for trial readers for my new short drama, "Love of the Introvert."It's a story of...
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Shriya: It's a beautiful story with strong characters and a great story line. It's emotionally very engaging from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this.
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lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!
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barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama
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now its getting better!
hmm