What is your opinion?
Slap of reality
"As I read the chapters, I empathized myself with your poem. People tend to think about these kinds of things; your description of those feelings and thoughts within your book made me feel the slap of reality in a more pleasant way. The only constructive criticism I have is to revise the grammar (there are a handful) and the small spelling mistakes. Cheers!"
Striking
"The poems are really heartfelt and the emotion is well conveyed through your words. Keep writing!"
Beautiful
"These poems are short but full of emotion. I really enjoyed reading these and I love your writing style"
Potential!
"This poem got its potential! I loved it! It was awesome, written in a smooth way! It's just too great!"
poet in the house!
"Your work is awsome. i love how each poem builds itself in understanding the theme.you should keep going with your story.i love it."
Sorry!!!
"The pain I can feel in the poems is real. They are great! You said to me that you want to stop writing, but I hope you never do stop."
Awesome!!!!
"One should absolutely give it a try, it is awesome poetry. I don't even have words to describe..."
Cool!
" Your writing is cool, I love the rhymes and briefness. "Daniel" and "Time" got me more. Your poetry is deep but you make little grammatical errors and I noticed that you often use "Your" in place of "You're". However, it's cool and really nice."
Interesting
"I'm usually not the biggest fan of poetry so I am definitely not the best judge but I liked the rhythmic style you used. That made the writing flow easier to follow. Still, at times, it felt like you were using a certain word just because it rhymed and not really to fit it. That left me confused with the context so my suggestion would be to be a bit more descriptive when it comes to those things. Some poems were really too short to get the point of and I understand that long ones intimidate you but I really believe this would improve their quality. You should also definitely proofread some of them and check the spelling and grammar. Overall, it's obvious you put a lot of your heart into the writing, which makes your work very relatable but there is room for improvement. "
NOICE!!!
"It's sad, and rings too hard with me, but I love it nonetheless."
Poetry, nice!
"Short, snappy and good. I somehow related to them, well not most of them. But I did feel for them and liked them, it inspired me to finish a poem I am currently making a girl in my class. wish me luck. P.S, I am reviewing this instead, so you can fix your little mistake on Hospital Grace. ~Yours Truly, Ruenigami."
