Shobana Gomes

In the Gap

This story is something out of the ordinary for me. I had never come across a plot like this until now. I truly enjoyed reading it and getting to feel some of the emotions that the writer expressed through his characters very well. The imagination of the writer is commendable and I think the characters that he portrayed in his story came across as well constructed. At the end of the story, though a poignant one, I felt the relief of the main character, Tyler, who I feel deserved the happiness of meeting his Redeemer after enduring much tests and pain. A very engaging and remarkable story.

The Curve In the Road

I think this is one of the best writing I have come across so far. The intensity of the story and the portrayal of the main character, Cooper's depiction of feigning errors and forgetfulness just to be diagnosed and considered normal is brilliantly put forward. I also love the detailed description of the scenes surrounding the storyline as I could picture it so concisely and clearly. The author s writing style is great. Kudos!!
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Enticing Read!

I really loved reading this story and have completed three chapters of it. It is entertaining and humorous and I loved the mythical quality to it. Kudos to you. Good luck and keep writing!

Skating Parties

The thing about writing poetry is that you can make the world go round with it. I love poetry and the magic it generates when inspiration comes knocking on my door. This is such a celebratory poem much like Christmas. Keep writing because your enthusiasm shines through your writing - shobana

The Love Story Of Greg And Ally

I loved that it was such a lighthearted story that gave me a chance to delve into a fairy tale. I loved the happily ever after feeling at the end. It is a lovely story Laraine and keep writing because your enthusiasm shines through your writing - shobana

Ted Bundy

The few pages that I read were well-crafted. The storyline engages a reader to turn the pages.
I wish you the best with the rest of the story - shobana

The Dutch's Bottle

Your story, Sandy, makes an interesting read. Because of the clarity you have in explaining the sequences, a reader can picture them in their mind vividly. There is suspense and associated drama. The dialogues are well-written so each character comes across as unique. I think it has great potential so keep writing.
Best wishes, shobana

Silent Storm

The author has put together a very comprehensive read. It is well-written, vivid with painstaking clarity.
The words and events flow wonderfully. I enjoyed the storytelling method too.
Well done and best wishes - shobana

Hypnagog

I am glad that in the end Porter was saved by Jane, and both their demons were laid to rest.
The author has written a well-constructed story.
I enjoyed how the author takes the reader through suspense and intrigue. The ending when Porter was finally told the truth was revealing.
The author has a good way of storytelling and the book is an enlightening read.
Best wishes, shobana

True Colors

I find the story written with a touch of flair for the different languages used to express sentiments. I also love the quotes written before the chapter begins. They are meaningful and get a reader ready to expect something along those lines in the upcoming chapter.
The settings in Italy and Florence are places for romantic indulgences. The descriptions are vivid and clear.
I loved the quirky manner in which the characters are portrayed and their emotions are well expressed too.
Just some grammar issues but otherwise the story is very well=written.
The author comes across as someone with a bold way of telling a story. An enlightening read.
Best wishes=shobana

A compelling read

The story is quite compelling and I think achieves the desired effect on a reader - creepy and bone-chilling. To this, I think the author has succeeded in her mission to produce a thriller.
The mother's demon and her childbearing each year as a sacrifice to keep Ana alive is quite unnerving. Something different from what I have read so far. Keep writing and best of luck - shobana

An excellent story

The author has written a story that keeps a reader engaged till the end and I commend her for that. It is fast paced and actually keeps you on your toes. I loved how the story takes one through the emotional upheavals experienced by the characters concerned. Kudos and best of luck on your future writing endeavors - shobana

An engaging read

I read three chapters published so far and think that the storyline is very engaging. The author has a down-to-earth way of storytelling. Best of luck with the story - shobana

Remarkable Imagination

I am giving this story five stars for the author's remarkable description of scenes and characters. His imagination has made this story come alive and I was taken in by his ever explosive potential in describing the events and emotions expressed here. Kudos and best of luck in your future writing endeavors.
shobana

The Exit Plan

The story has all the makings of a great read. It is written very well, both in language use and description.
Kudos to you.

Best wishes,
Shobana

Pride and Promises

I found the story witty and humorous and I think you managed to describe the emotive sequences well. You have good storytelling technique in that you keep the reader engaged with your story.
Keep up the good work!

Best wishes,
shobana

Justify

The story has an interesting story line, quite emotive. Just a couple of grammar mistakes and restructuring that needs to be looked into.
Good luck and best wishes,
Shobana

Absolutely Engaging!

I loved this story. It has all the makings of a blockbuster movie - intrigue, drama, romance, wit, and interesting dialogue. I didn't for a moment feel the boredom that sometimes come with reading a book.
A great job of writing it I should say. The last chapter left me wondering if Lucifer was finally dead!

AGNI

The first thing that came to mind when I started the story was that it had a very good story line. There is so much imagination put into this story, and if it is constructed better, will make it a very enlightening one.
I must commend the writer for his enthusiasm which he portrays in his characters. He writes as he thinks.I could visualize his determination in putting this intricate story together. I encourage the use of Grammar to check punctuation, grammar, etc.

Overall, it has the makings of a great story and wish you the very best in your writing endeavors.
-shobana-

Frost Lock

This story intrigues as it interests a reader from the start to finish. The writer's intention to reveal the plot is clear and concise. The scenes are portrayed vividly, that as one reads, you can envision both the surroundings and emotions explained therein.
The last chapter is emotive and I like that Olga is indoctrinated as a werewolf, in the end. When I started reading the story, I felt sorry that she was in a wheelchair.
Overall, I would recommend this story as a "very good read."
Wishing you the best,
shobana

Chapter 4

I read the chapter and it is a very engaging story. Dad and his way of saying things made me smile. There is so much honesty in what you put across. Good luck with your story.

Headlock

What stood out most for me in this story is the honesty and discipline that the author had to see through to achieve his aim. He clearly is an inspiration to anyone seeking to make dreams happen in their life. Gregory has delivered the last punch wisely. He has given anyone who reads this story, his ideas towards living a fulfilled life and pushes them to reach for the stars. Ultimately it is his willpower and strength that shines through. Definitely one of the most inspiring stories I have ever read.

Keep Your Promises

Generally the story line was good and even quite compelling in certain instances. You have so much potential and it is a great plus point that you have written a book at your age. There have been quite a few grammar and spelling errors. A few of the paragraphs were quite repetitive as well.

Keep writing and just as I have learnt in the writing arena, there is always room for improvement!
shobana

Ladies Close Your Eyes

Overall I found myself imagining the scenes described so vividly and with clarity while reading the book and could picture them as it were.
There was certainly a lot of creativity in the writing with the right element of keeping the interest of the reader intact.

I liked that it came with a song as well as it built up the suspense to the story. Makes a good story line for a book.

shobana