Shobana Gomes

Malaysia

Poet/Writer and the published author of Imagination Unchained. https://t.co/jLLiJVSoJI

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Skating Parties

The thing about writing poetry is that you can make the world go round with it. I love poetry and the magic it generates when inspiration comes knocking on my door. This is such a celebratory poem much like Christmas. Keep writing because your enthusiasm shines through your writing - shobana

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The Love Story Of Greg And Ally

I loved that it was such a lighthearted story that gave me a chance to delve into a fairy tale. I loved the happily ever after feeling at the end. It is a lovely story Laraine and keep writing because your enthusiasm shines through your writing - shobana

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Interesting Read

The story had me visualizing how tradition sometimes stand in the way of love especially where Indian families are concerned. It is told in a very interesting manner and keeps the readers engaged till the end. There is an omission in a sentence in Chapter 11 when Biju asks Renu "Are you with child?' I think the word "with" was erroneously omitted. It is a well written story. Good luck to you in the contest - shobana

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Keep Your Promises

Generally the story line was good and even quite compelling in certain instances. You have so much potential and it is a great plus point that you have written a book at your age. There have been quite a few grammar and spelling errors. A few of the paragraphs were quite repetitive as well.

Keep writing and just as I have learnt in the writing arena, there is always room for improvement!
shobana

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Ladies Close Your Eyes

Overall I found myself imagining the scenes described so vividly and with clarity while reading the book and could picture them as it were.
There was certainly a lot of creativity in the writing with the right element of keeping the interest of the reader intact.

I liked that it came with a song as well as it built up the suspense to the story. Makes a good story line for a book.

shobana

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