Shobana Gomes

Malaysia

Poet/Writer, I write to capture another's imagination!

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In the Gap

This story is something out of the ordinary for me. I had never come across a plot like this until now. I truly enjoyed reading it and getting to feel some of the emotions that the writer expressed through his characters very well. The imagination of the writer is commendable and I think the characters that he portrayed in his story came across as well constructed. At the end of the story, though a poignant one, I felt the relief of the main character, Tyler, who I feel deserved the happiness of meeting his Redeemer after enduring much tests and pain. A very engaging and remarkable story.

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The Curve In the Road

I think this is one of the best writing I have come across so far. The intensity of the story and the portrayal of the main character, Cooper's depiction of feigning errors and forgetfulness just to be diagnosed and considered normal is brilliantly put forward. I also love the detailed description of the scenes surrounding the storyline as I could picture it so concisely and clearly. The author s writing style is great. Kudos!!
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Engrossing

This is an engrossing story CETurner.. I was wondering why you had it all compressed into very long paragraphs. I noticed missing punctuation marks too. Your story is quite a fascinating one which keeps the reader engaged very well. It just needs a bit of restructuring where the paragraphs are concerned to make it a little more presentable.I think it will make a great movie. You should submit it to Screencraft.

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Enticing Read!

I really loved reading this story and have completed three chapters of it. It is entertaining and humorous and I loved the mythical quality to it. Kudos to you. Good luck and keep writing!

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Skating Parties

The thing about writing poetry is that you can make the world go round with it. I love poetry and the magic it generates when inspiration comes knocking on my door. This is such a celebratory poem much like Christmas. Keep writing because your enthusiasm shines through your writing - shobana

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The Love Story Of Greg And Ally

I loved that it was such a lighthearted story that gave me a chance to delve into a fairy tale. I loved the happily ever after feeling at the end. It is a lovely story Laraine and keep writing because your enthusiasm shines through your writing - shobana

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Interesting Read

The story had me visualizing how tradition sometimes stand in the way of love especially where Indian families are concerned. It is told in a very interesting manner and keeps the readers engaged till the end. There is an omission in a sentence in Chapter 11 when Biju asks Renu "Are you with child?' I think the word "with" was erroneously omitted. It is a well written story. Good luck to you in the contest - shobana

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Headlock

What stood out most for me in this story is the honesty and discipline that the author had to see through to achieve his aim. He clearly is an inspiration to anyone seeking to make dreams happen in their life. Gregory has delivered the last punch wisely. He has given anyone who reads this story, his ideas towards living a fulfilled life and pushes them to reach for the stars. Ultimately it is his willpower and strength that shines through. Definitely one of the most inspiring stories I have ever read.

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Keep Your Promises

Generally the story line was good and even quite compelling in certain instances. You have so much potential and it is a great plus point that you have written a book at your age. There have been quite a few grammar and spelling errors. A few of the paragraphs were quite repetitive as well.

Keep writing and just as I have learnt in the writing arena, there is always room for improvement!
shobana

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Ladies Close Your Eyes

Overall I found myself imagining the scenes described so vividly and with clarity while reading the book and could picture them as it were.
There was certainly a lot of creativity in the writing with the right element of keeping the interest of the reader intact.

I liked that it came with a song as well as it built up the suspense to the story. Makes a good story line for a book.

shobana

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