Ravager_S.K.Dingman

Codex Mortem

This story was very intriguing. The way it is developing has me pulled in and wanting more. There was a couple of grammatical errors which is not bad when editing your own stuff. The only other thing was the speaking. It was a little confusing at first since I am so used to quotations but once I figured it out, it made sense. However, I feel quotations would be best used when having characters speak so there would not be anymore confusion.
Other than those couple of things, I really enjoyed the story! Can't wait for more!

Beautiful

I usually do not read poetry, but this was beautiful. It was well-written, making me feel the emotions coming through the words as I read them.
Great job writer.

Finding Paradise in Hell

The story is very well written so far. The details are captivating and the development of each characters histories is wonderful.
The only thing that I was a not 100% sold on was how fast Isabelle moved on from her husband, daughter, and baby. I personally feel like she should be going through the ups and downs of loosing them before flirting with Zachariah. But that is just my opinion :)
Otherwise, this is a great story so far! Keep it up!

Raised by Vampires

This is a great book. The plot and storyline are wonderful. The author gives simple descriptions but I was still able to imagine the scenery and the characters. The characters are very well thought out as well, I am quite attached to Eleanor and Aric so far.
Editing is needed, since there is spelling and punctuation errors. And sometimes I got the characters mixed up when talking and/or making an expression just after talking.
Other than that, this is a great story and I look forward to the updates!

Loved it!

I love this, it is definitely my type of story. So dark and freaky, I love how he talks to himself and you find out more and more as you go on that he truly is insane. I hope there will be more of this because this was fantastic.
Great writing style and plot!

The Rise of a Luna Review

This was a well developed story. There were few punctuation or grammar errors, and the way the author wrote was excellent for immersing yourself in the story.
There were a couple things I did take note of. For example, when there was a time skip, there was not any indication of it, it just went straight from Caelynn doing something that morning then the next paragraph would be that night in bed with Erik. It confused me a few times while I was reading so maybe an asterisk or some kind of symbol to help signify the jump in time. The other thing was there was a lot of "eye rolls" from both the main characters. I know this is a great indication of annoyance, etc. Just be careful not to use to much of it.
But other than those two things, the way you wrote the characters was fantastic. I was able to emerge myself and get emotional on both sides.
Keep up your writing! You are doing great!

Excited to read more!

I really like the futuristic cyber feel of the story and the action was well written! However I did get confused in a few spots on who was talking and who was evading/shooting who. Other than that I'm really excited to read more of it. Great job!

Good plot! Keep it up!

The plot is really good, however editing is needed for punctuation.
Keep up the good work!!