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The story is original, the characters relatable and it's an enjoyable read. Can really empathise with the heroine and also understand the other characters. The way Killian and Riley's relationship is developing is exciting. I think it would be more interesting if other characters were brought into the plot.
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The story is great, original and draws you in as it is written in a way the reader can empathise with the protagonist. The different perspectives gives the reader a better understanding of the characters. Spell check required in some sections.
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