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Fascinating and Unique

A fascinating paradox of the natural and the supernatural! Set in a world where the existence of the legendary werewolves is common knowledge to humans, Recrudescence enmeshes readers not into a dystopian war of werewolves against humans, but into a delightful world of bountiful blossoms and beauty residing in the natural wonders of Mother Nature. My sole concern is the repetitive use of some words such as beautiful, as is seen in "a beautiful day... a beautiful sunrise... it's beautiful darling" (Recrudescence). In light of this support, I believe your novel would improve with a few substitutions such as the words mesmeric, hypnotic and charming. Moreover, there are quite a few grammar errors, so don't forget to run your manuscript through Grammerly!

I do hope my insight will be beneficial to you,
XOXO, S

Suspenseful Prosody

A fascinating, poetic take on the drama and romance genres!

This novel adapts unique, dynamic personalities straight from the prologue, delightfully enmeshing readers into a deliciously complex realm of enigma! I very much loved Mae's resilient strength and her portrayal in the alternating narratives between protagonists. Mae's character is refreshing, and she certainly propels the plot forward with finesse. My only concern is the grammar errors- which mainly include comma misuse and the occasional dangling modifier.

Lastly, when you wrote, "Soaked to the bone, Anne shivering and caving in of herself," I believe you meant to write 'caving in on herself.'

Overall, this is an intriguing read of suspense that captures attention with artful grace.

A Humorous Delight

A humorous tale of high school escapades, this short novel is the epitome of character development with a perfect hint of satire!

My only concern is the consistent use of emojis because they begin to act as essential mediums of expression and even introspection for the protagonist- which you should be cautious of, as novels should only contain icons for text separation purposes.

Overall, this is a delightfully comedic tale that I hope will be updated soon.

A Sinister Thriller

The Dare is a riveting and sinister thriller!

I adore the contrasting personalities of both melancholy Sage and sweet Salem! I love how their differences play off of one another, and this improves the dialogue tenfold. My only concern is how many times you mentioned how gloomy Sage is. Following the general rule of 'show not tell' I'd recommend that you accentuate Sage's anti-social behavior more through her interactions rather than repetition.

Overall, a compelling horror story I very much enjoyed reading!

Captivating

Inside Out is a fascinating read imbued with intriguing mystery! I really appreciated the dynamic four protagonists as well as the enigma of a fast-paced plot. ❤

My only concern is the grammar errors such as in the summary "they are unaware of how worst her life in"(Inside Out). In this example, the use of the word 'worse' is incorrect (the word doesn't work in this context). The correction would be something along the lines of, "they are unaware of how horrible her life is".

Overall, an interesting novel penned by a talented aspiring author.

Captivating World Building

A fascinating beginning to a novel, enhanced both with mystery and extravagant world-building!

You've crafted a unique tale that is refreshing in its originality and have developed dynamic characters right from the start! You've also given the protagonists a future brimming with potential, and I can't wait to discover Eranor's story. This all set aside, my only concern is the relatively slow plot. Now this may simply be a personal preference, but with fantasy novels where the world is infinitely different and complex in comparison to ours, a fast-paced plot enmeshes readers into a fantastical world, compelling us to read more.

Overall, a wonderful book that I shall continue reading, (as soon as I have the time to).

Compelling

A creative take on the romance genre that charmed me from the start!

I was drawn in by the argumentative dialogue between the heroine and the hero that had a notable flirtatious undertone. My main concern is the immature temperament of the protagonist, as Lily is prone to whining. But honestly, that critique is a personal preference, and of course, your character has room to grow and develop into a dynamic person.

Finally, several grammar errors render your novel confusing, such as the repetitive use of the word 'dint' (by which I assume you meant to write 'didn't') so watch out for that.

Overall, a compelling novel penned by a talented writer.

Hypnotic

A hypnotic, riveting novella about instant attractions and lust at first sight!

I adore the flirtatious dialogue between Chance and Kristoff (whom I most definitely ship)! Their connection is instantaneous yet genuine and positively influences Chance's inner thoughts and introspective personality. My only concern is the numerous grammar mistakes. For instance, "he straighten in an upright position" should have a different verb form 'he straightened in an...'

Overall, this is a compelling romance story I very much enjoyed reading!

Unique

Queen of Bad Luck is a unique take on the romance and drama genres!

I very much appreciated the world building and dynamic characters, both of which you have developed right from your novel's start. Rhea, the protagonist, appears to be a very complex character tormented by her past, and so the periodic flashbacks complimented the story wonderfully.

However, my main concerns would be the numerous grammar mistakes, many of which are missing a determiner before a noun phrase or contain faulty verb tenses such as "why are you not died yet"- which should be corrected to 'why are you not dead yet?'

Overall, an original novel that would greatly benefit from online editors, (of which I highly recommend the use of Grammarly.)

A Riveting, Unique Tale

As a lover of vampiric lore, I can say in full honesty that Forevermore has made it the top of my favorite supernatural reads! 😊 The characters are deliciously complex, especially Vladimir, whom I found myself empathizing with because of the well versed and well written memory flashbacks. I love "villain" narratives, and your captivating way of writing has made me regard Vladimir with conflicted feelings- despite his violent tendencies and ruthlessness. Overall, this Gothic world you have created with historical drama and realistic, relevant issues is both breathtaking and stunning!

I've only made it halfway through the book, but I am extremely impressed with your writing finesse and will definitely continue reading!

P.S: I love Roland- such an amazing character.

Paranormal With a Twist

To the fascinating paranormal genre is added a unique werewolf tale of enigma and romance!

I really appreciated the beta-wolf, Coraline's free spirit and impulsiveness. Her character is refreshing and she certainly propels the plot forward with finesse! Moreover, the fact that this novel's protagonist isn't an alpha and the story-line doesn't revolve around alpha wolves makes Crossing the Line a very refreshing and unique take on supernatural stories. My only concern would be the amount of grammar errors and the odd extra spaces before punctuation marks.

Overall, a riveting tale of forbidden romance.

Unique

Breaking the Rules is a unique take on a forbidden romance!

I very much appreciated the in-depth character descriptions and how you've defined the characters' personalities right from the start. Moreover, the flash-back was a welcome addition to the novel and added an interesting backstory to the plot. My main concern is the shy temperament of the protagonist, (as she is easily intimidated and constantly embarrassed), but honestly, that critique is a personal preference, and of course your character has room to grow and develop into a dynamic person.

Overall, an intriguing novel penned by a talented writer.

Fascinating & Unique

Porcelain is a refreshingly unique take on the mystery genre!

I very much appreciated the inner strength, daring, and audacious side of the protagonist, as it is a welcomed reprieve from the usual timid leading ladies. The addition of the enigmatic breaking porcelain descriptions were delightfully captivating, and I cannot wait to discover the true symbolism behind the porcelain. My only concerns would be the numerous grammatical errors, and so I'd highly recommend the use of Grammerly, (an online editor).

Overall, a unique, mysterious tale of action.

Unique Novella

A unique novella that is sure to intrigue readers of the supernatural romance genre!

A couple of the most notable aspects in "Hauntly Romance" are the character dynamics in Will as his perception on reality becomes more focused, as well as the captivating fast-paced plot. This being said, I would have preferred a more in depth writing style that delves into the core of the protagonist's emotions, and of course longer chapters. Moreover, there are numerous grammatical errors, so be certain to always run your manuscript through Grammarly before submitting.

Overall, you are a talented writer and I cannot wait to read a more developed work of yours. ❤

Enthralling

Tormented's enigmatic and suspenseful plot is absolutely riveting!

The conspicuous shadows darkening Salem's past add delightful depth to this novel, and the character dialogue is often witty and offers comical relief. Moreover, I very much appreciate how the poignant reminders of Salem's past persona are written, (while she compares her current melancholy temperament with her previous audacious one), as this is the epitome of the word 'torment'.

A word of advice, when penning complex mysteries, strive to provide readers with more thought-provoking clues, (IE: peculiar occurrences that can later be unraveled by readers as the novel progresses). This being said, I truly hope that Salem isn't the witch who decimated that poor town, as this would be too obvious a plot twist.

Overall, an enticing novel that I cannot wait to continue reading.

Realistic Wonder

I adored and was truly impressed with your writing style! You add touches of realism to your novel that enhances your writing and clearly portrays the scenes. Moreover, the plot was fast-paced and intriguing, and I found the interaction between the two dynamic characters Scott and Corrina to be engaging and humorous. My only concern are the grammar errors like when Scott says "I'll concur." I'm pretty sure the correction is "I concur".

Overall, this is a captivating read that I would most certainly recommend.

Vivid World-Building

This is such a riveting start to a story!

I adored the fast paced plot and the character introductions truly hooked me in. From the fathomless mystery of the black armored warriors to fleeting hint of oceanic magic, AMOS spins a fascinating tale while still weaving in the complex politics of Inquisition's world. My only concern is the conspicuously slow pace of the first four paragraphs. My preference would be to avoid using monotonous moments, (such as Shaey tending to her responsibilities in her father's fish shop), for a story's beginning. I believe it's important to begin a story with something incalculable so that your prose will be remarkable, and I'd recommend you 'spice up' the first few lines.

Overall, an intriguing read that does not merely hold readers attention but captures it, commanding us with artful authority.

A Chilling Read

An intriguing read full of chilling and unexpected twists!

I very much appreciated the dialogue and fast paced plot, as well as the dynamic characters and contrasting notes of Henry's brutality and Rose's naivete. 'The Unexpected' is a well written thriller that engaged me and had me reading fast with anticipation. My only concerns are the length of the chapters (a bit too short), and the grammar errors. Moreover, I would've loved to have gotten Henry's backstory, as this would better endear readers to Henry's complex character.

Overall, this is a captivating read!

Captivating

A very captivating and engaging novel! I was drawn in by the sense of mystery woven into Silent Noise as well as the fascinating plot. However, there are several grammar errors which render your novel confusing, so watch out for that.

Clear and Intriguing

Right from the start, I found myself captivated by Emergence's plot! I appreciate how you've developed your characters right from the start by illustrating their unique, dynamic personalities. Moreover, your narrative is clear and this helps to engage readers. My only concern is the grammar and punctuation, but this can easily be fixed by using Grammerly.

I do hope my insight will be beneficial to you,
XOXO, S

Profoundly Interesting...

I found your prologue to be an intriguing, unique take in the romance genre. I especially appreciated how you introduced one of your main topics, (themes) by exploring the restraints of fate and how insidious the expectations of those closest to you can be. One thing I would recommend altering is a specific line recounting Ella's anguish, "to go up to the tree house after the boys... Christian wouldn't look out for the nest and the eggs would fall out an die" (Once Bytten). In this instance, I feel as though by creating a personal attachment to these bird eggs (for Ella), like saying she fondly took care of them as she eagerly awaited their hatching, would accentuate Christian's indifference to Ella's emotions and better hint at the "controlling, manipulative billionaire" he is to become. Moreover, this will emphasize young Ella's unassailable determination when she proclaims she will never wed Christian.

I do hope my insight will be beneficial to you,
XOXO, S