Ben Wrixon and Brandon McWeeney

Burlington

Joint account for Ben Wrixon and Brandon McWeeney. Check out our novel, Stop. Start. Hesitate

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Cool!

I like what I've read so far. From a story standpoint, yours is quite original all while having just enough familiarity. It's exciting and you write action-packed, exciting scenes really well. I love how you're able to keep the energy going through a scene. As far as writing, I'd suggest this: sometimes, you need to say 'the sound of,' you can just say the sound. So take a sentence like this: "I heard the sound of sticks crunching beneath my feet." Another way of saying it would be something like: "sticks crunched beneath my boots." As a writer, you still get the description and make the reader feel the sense you're trying to convey (in this case, hearing). Overall though, pretty cool!! Care to check out my novel, 'Stop. Start. Hesitate'?

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Interesting

I by no means read erotica (I actually clicked on this by accident), but I read a few pages and was impressed by the quality of writing and the author's ability to set a scene. Fans of the genre will love it. Keep up the good work!

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Good read

I found it entertaining all the way through and really enjoyed the concept. In fact, it's similar to my novel on Inkitt!!!

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