Purpose
Have you ever wondered what your purpose was in life? Well I have, my name is Serafina Rose McCarty, and I'm sixteen years old, and I have Brittle Bone Disease. Ever since the day I was born things have been different for me people were always watching over me making sure I didn't fall or run into anything my parents even made sure I was on a very strict diet and that I took my meds on time and many other things, not that I'm complaining or anything it's just that now that I'm older I wish they would trust me to do more things on my own. Another thing about me is that I'm a Christian and my Faith is really important to me and I know that Jesus is always with me, sometimes it's really hard to trust His will especially when it seems like everything is against me and I think how is this shaping who I am as a person then I realize even if I can't possibly comprehend it He's got a plan and I have to trust it no matter what. Lately I've been thinking about my future and what want to do with my life what career I want to have once I graduate college I don't exactly have a dream career in mind and my skills are average at best, so now I want to find my true purpose, but I can't help feeling unsure about everything I mean what if I get out into the world and people try to take advantage of me because of my disability, or they bully me because of my faith I just feel like maybe I'm not prepared for what's out there and that makes me very nervous.
this chapter was great and descriptive, just that there are no punctuations, so it feels like you running through the words.
Hello, this chapter is very well written, but I would look at the punctuation. I also liked the way you expressed feelings of the main character in this story.