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Spelling

"If the "Delors" is your story is supposed to be Umbridge from the Harry Potter world, you spelled her name wrong. It's actually spelt "Dolores". And the song lyrics are hard to read because there isn't any spaces between the words. Everything else about the story is amazing."

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My Cullen

"I truly enjoyed this story. Thank u for writing it. ♥️♥️♥️"

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My Cullen

"Like everything about it especially that Severus and Draco are getting along great with Harry and I like how Ron is somewhat the bad guy. "

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WOW

"I loved this book and I hate to see it go but it was a great book my absolute favorite and you are a great author and I will be reading some more of your great works."

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awesome

"thank you for writing this story I loved it. it was great I enjoyed every minute of it I couldn't stop reading you did a fantastic job. Thanks for killing ron he was starting to piss me off. he was being a dick. I love that you made it a gay love story its about time someone did. love it great job."

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