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Dry

"Jennifer 90y"

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The First Command

"I absolutely loved it! Very nice story, a bit spicy, a wonderful soulmates and self searching story and a lesson about always knowing both sides of a story!"

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Excellent Spicy Book

"What a great romp! I love happy endings! Can’t wait to continue to book two now. Great spicy read and excellent imagination. "

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Unique and Hot as Hell

"This is such a great story. Truly a must read!"

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Amazing book

"Thank you so much for writing this book and making it free. It kept me enthralled from start to finish. I lost so much sleep cause I just wanted to find out what happened next lol. Was very sad when I got to the end and can't wait for the next one. 😍"

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An awesome book

"I loved this book. I think this whole story from the Bible is so interesting. I understand that this is just fiction and also the Bible is fiction. I love how this was turned into a romance story. I just really loved it!!!"

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The First Command

"Everything I wanted and more!! As always, incredible imagination, well written and edited. Full of depravity, sweetness and love; I loved it and am looking forward to reading the second command "

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ONGOING-The First Command Book One...

"Flora's journey to bring her to her Lucifer hiding on Earth in Ambrose's body. A mythical hot and Steamy mystery. 👍🏼👏🏼💘🎣😍🇦🇺"

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The first command -book one

"Love this cant wait to read more."

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Ohhh myyyy gooood

"This story is insane. I’m trapped here lol. Thank you for this!"

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Lucifer the Demon

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nice style of writing

"nice style of writing "

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The First Command

"Great story, just looking forward to the updates!"

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Good so far

"I like the book so far. I do hope it picks up a bit though, but not too bad I would say."

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Ambrose

"It's getting good the more I read"

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The first command

"Love this book so far soo good enjoyed every chapter 😊. Their private talk,his attention to every little detail,their interaction, her anticipation and his command. 😉🥰 Looking forward to read this book. 😀 Author your works are great 👍🏻 Interesting stories.📚"

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The first command

"Such a great book! Love the story"

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Tracey

"I so can’t wait for them to get on I will b so hot"

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Thanks for reading my book!

"Author speaking: thanks for reading my book! ❤️"

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Enjoy. Bjjj. Hjkm

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