The New House by lilyemma1117 at Inkitt
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The New House

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Summary

Emily is a 13 year old girl who is wanting the perfect summer with her friends and maybe hang with her crush but that all goes downhill when she is at the public pool and runs to the bathroom and saw a ghost and ends up in the hospital her mom goes into a coma could this summer be any worse?!

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 Emily


It was dark when I opend my eyes. I did not know where I was, I was scared... I started walking but heard a big bang..... well let’s start from the beginning. My name is Emily and i’m 13. This is when my terible adventure started. It was the beginning of june summer time finally I thought. I grabed my phone of my bed stand and texting my bff’s Chloe and Zoey we were going to plan our day. “Knock Knock”

“Daniel can you get the door I’m on the phone?” I asked my big brother Daniel. I should probaly tell you about him. So before you have the urge to throw up my brother is pretty hot I know I know cring right uggg. But that is not the worst of it HE HAS GANSTER FRIENDS.!!!!! It is terbile all the girls falling over him yuck!

“Yeah sure whatever are you on the phone with chloe and zoey ?” Daniel asked

“Both now get the damn door!” He is so anyoning but he is old enoph to sing for packages while mom and dad are at work.

“I’m going to the pool be home at 4.” I said as I grabed my stuff and went off heading for the door.

“Umm no your not not with out me I’m coming to.” He said standing in front of me and the door.

“Heck no there is no way I’m letting you go out with me and my friends just so you can get in zoey’s pants back off she doesn’tnlike anybody.” I said, I was in a rage I was mad that my own brother could not just trust me and let me hang out with my friends what did he think I was going to do.

I like to spend my free time reading or writing or even drawing, I mean I sucked at it but I still loved it, it was calming and it makes me feel calm, thats wierd I know.

“I take you there and come along or you don’t go at all your little pice of....” there were some more colorfull words said but this is supposed to be a clean story and my brother is not clean well till after but well get to that latter.

“Fine you can come but not your dumb idiot ganster wannabe friends.” I said sternely with my arms crossed

“Deal lets go.” Daniel grabed his keys to his black mustane and told me to hop in. I don’t like to sit in the back you don’t wanna know why.

Once we were on the road I called my freinds.

“Hey girls yes were on our way... yes by were I mean me and dainel I told him he could come if he stays away from you guys and doesn’t bring his friends.... he says he won’t and I belive him.” I said then I put the phone on speaker

“Sorry your on speaker." I told them

"Hey Hey hot stuff..." I cringed "...How are my babies?" Daniel said, which is wierd because he never hits on other people only to say your not my type and things like that so him hitting on my friends is wierd.

Plus Chloe has a boyfriend she is 16 while zoey is 17, (we both wished we weren't single), Zoey sometimes says that daniel is hot and I try to pretend not to throw up.

There’s this really cute guy in my class his name is chaz he is so cute I wanna tell him how I feel and it pains me when we walk in the hallway and he walks away from me or acts like i dont exist. “Maybe this is the year” I hoped.






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